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Red the Vampire
Red the Vampire Contin.
The father of both the boys looked down at Red and let out a sigh. "Dad." Wispered Red as he held his side where the cut had been so deep that it cut a lunge. "You wanted to live outside of the castle and look what it brought you." Red had no more tears to shed anymore. "Kill me father please. I dont want to live anymore." Red's father let out one more sigh and said. "Im sorry my son but I can do no more for you but this." His father took his sword and swong it through the air.






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TheQuietDisaster
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commentCommented on: Sat May 02, 2009 @ 12:43am
that's it!??!?!?!?!?!?!?
thanks alot for the cliff hanger there, real nice..
blaugh


commentCommented on: Sun May 31, 2009 @ 05:34pm
eek
O.e
*twitch*
that's...it?!?!?!?!
ugh please write more!!
*puppydog eyes*
pweeeeeeeeeeese?



xXSunny-RainXx
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AprilxXxShowers
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commentCommented on: Thu Jun 04, 2009 @ 10:30pm
Wow...
that's really good...
keep it up
^_^
BTW i'm kinda new, so wanna be friends?


commentCommented on: Mon Jun 22, 2009 @ 03:20am
Thats pretty good. *gives round of applause* Thanks for the cliff hanger but my bet is the father is going to stab the carpet or whatever instead of Red...=^.^=



Cary_Love_Some_More
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King Of Scream
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commentCommented on: Fri May 28, 2010 @ 02:50am
How very interesting


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