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Red the Vampire Cont. Red's sword meets his brothers with a blind furry. His brother just laughs and then pushs him back. "You where never as strong as i was. What makes you think you can be any stronger now?" Red grits his teeth as he comes in with anougher blow this time it hits cutting into his brothers shirt but missing his flesh. "Stop talking and FIGHT!" Drake's face whent from playing to a mad look. His sword moves into attack pose and ready to strike Red down. They both go running toward each other and in a flash and the sound of metal hitting flesh blood falls onto the ground.

Posted by: Bluenekofox Wed Apr 09, 2008 @ 11:34pm

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TheQuietDisaster
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Commented on: Thu Apr 10, 2008 @ 12:37am


	oh my gwee that is soo good i hope more people comment so you can write more!! >.<

Commented on: Thu Apr 10, 2008 @ 01:05am

Red The Vampie Is Awesome
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xXSunny-RainXx
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Commented on: Thu Apr 10, 2008 @ 01:10am


	nice it very good it could be a book some day...if you fixed the spelling lolz

Commented on: Thu Apr 10, 2008 @ 10:32am


	O.O Wow! I bet you it was Red huh? I'd laugh if it was, but anyway, it was really good! More please! These are very addicting ^^

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Commented on: Thu Apr 10, 2008 @ 12:24pm


	wow that is good you know what check my jornal Im soon gonna add another story about Akogara and her demon smile I hope you like the one where she was first in the labn than ecaped

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