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Amber the Human!! Amber jumped up from the ground and wraped her arms around Red's neck. She pushed her soft lips against his as he wraped his arms around her waist. Red softly wispered into her ear after the kiss was over. "I love you Amber." Amber smiled and playfully nibbled on his ear lob and then softly said. "I love you more." Red shut his eyes because he loved it when she nibbled on his ears. He finally pulled away and she looked at him with a evil smile. "I have a suprise for you." Said Red. "My brother Drake is coming to vist use tonight." Amber layed her head against his chest and said. "Im glad i get to finally meet some of your family." Red kissed her forhead and then heard a knock on the door. "That must be him." Red ran for the door jumping down steps for his room was up stairs. Finally getting to the front door he opened it to see his brother standing there looking him straight in the eyes. "Good evening brother." Said Drake. "Same to you." Answered Red. They did not shake hands or hug they where not that type of brothers. "So where is this woman of yours? I hope she is as pretty as my last one." Drake let out a soft laugh as he looked around and finally spotted Amber. Drakes face was no longer full of kindness but now of disgust. He turned to Red and looked him in the eye. "She is a human."

Posted by: Bluenekofox Mon Jun 02, 2008 @ 02:29am

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Commented on: Wed Jun 04, 2008 @ 09:27pm


	what?! so shes ugly cuz shes person?! burning_eyes dude. thats dum.

Commented on: Wed Jun 04, 2008 @ 10:27pm


	hey look another cmt. =]

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Commented on: Wed Jun 04, 2008 @ 10:29pm


	nd this makes 3 so get busy xd

Commented on: Sun Jun 08, 2008 @ 11:04pm


	...wow

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Commented on: Sun Jun 08, 2008 @ 11:19pm


	oh my god!! wow ... wow blaugh that was suposed to be my siggy sweatdrop

Commented on: Mon Jun 16, 2008 @ 04:34am


	OH MY GAWD!!! i just read the whole thing and i hope you get published for this!! blaugh

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Commented on: Wed Jun 25, 2008 @ 09:37am


	come on hooker!!!!! you have like 7 cmts bye 3 differnt ppl... so make more story now. xd

Commented on: Fri Jun 27, 2008 @ 07:48am


	this is the only part I read but it is good ^_^

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Commented on: Wed Aug 13, 2008 @ 11:33pm


	Its really good. But in the end you said, "Drakes face was no longer full of kindness but now of discust." But "discust" is spelt 'disgust'. I like the story though!

Commented on: Sun Aug 24, 2008 @ 03:29am


	are you ever gonna tell us how drake kills her?? >.<

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Commented on: Sun Oct 12, 2008 @ 07:45pm


	good confused

Commented on: Fri Nov 07, 2008 @ 02:01pm


	very brilliant...-crosses one leg over the other and reads on- so is this some sort of ongoing story? or is this you?

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Commented on: Tue Nov 18, 2008 @ 02:35am


	Wow this is Awsome i can't wait until the next post

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