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My poems :]
This is my journal of original poems Aiming for 100 of them! :]
What's the point?
Loneliness gets the best of us
Sadness brings out the rest inside
Despair to us is just like lust
All we do is always hide

We never let anything out
Always keeping in everything
The reason why we always cut
Is because we can never handle it

We shutout the world
saying to ourselves
"I'll wait it out because I'm bold"
Not even knowing themselves.

In the end we just lie down and die
Giving up on this thing called life
Not knowing why we are still alive
Hoping for a better chance in the afterlife

Once we reach there
We notice It's not the same
Everyone you care for back on earth isn't here
You cry for everything to come back because it's lame

You wake up once more
Knowing that everything was a dream
Now that you know what's in store
You regret ever thinking like that and live life with a gleam.






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TheresaGoeSRawR
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commentCommented on: Sun Jan 04, 2009 @ 07:51am
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwe~~
crying crying heart heart 4laugh
i swear papa...you should put this stuff in a book xD
i like the "lame" part LOL
but i really did love it, it was like a song with no music<3


commentCommented on: Sun Jan 04, 2009 @ 08:00am
Gee... you are talented.T-T
Please don't be sad anymore...



Konoei
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chasing flowers
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commentCommented on: Sun Jan 04, 2009 @ 08:00am
wow
intensity of despair
to hold one's heart down in a bowl of darkness
it's so sad yet it's true
Your poems are good yet sad but sill good


commentCommented on: Mon Jan 05, 2009 @ 01:42am
You are pretty talented Sany!!
*hugs*!!!



Andraka
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LilSquee
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commentCommented on: Mon Jan 05, 2009 @ 01:50am
crying so sad crying but it is true...alot of ppl feel that way..this was really good xD


commentCommented on: Mon Jan 05, 2009 @ 04:49am
Wow Dad ^.~

BEAUTIFUL <3

heart 3nodding



OH__monichi
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