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My poems :]
This is my journal of original poems Aiming for 100 of them! :]
Smiles
Everyday I continue to smile
for my family,friends,and acquaintances all
to them I seem happy and riled
But in fact I am sad depressed and continue to fall

Never shown to the world
always kept to myself
Anger that has become boiled
Sadness that has become oneself

In the end I'm left alone
Left to rot and die
Crying to the bone
All because of one lie

As you reach the darkest of your hour
You realize that you aren't by yourself
Those same friends and family never turned sour
They helped you all by their self

Now you can stand freely and proud
knowing that you can smile
this time not a lie covered shroud
But a truth that's worthwhile







User Comments: [8] [add]
Sky willow
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commentCommented on: Wed Dec 31, 2008 @ 07:38pm
@ 1st i was all crying
then as i read on i was like surprised
in the end i was all smile


commentCommented on: Wed Dec 31, 2008 @ 07:39pm
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so pretty
*tear tear* crying crying
i loveeed it<333 heart
you should post this in the arenas ;DDDDD



TheresaGoeSRawR
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Andraka
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commentCommented on: Wed Dec 31, 2008 @ 07:47pm
Aww T__T
I love it!!
Wish I was more poetic... .__. but I'm an epic fail in that matter!!
:3 But I like your ways of writing!


commentCommented on: Wed Dec 31, 2008 @ 08:23pm
Leo so Beautiful crying crying

You write like my Ex blaugh

It like really touched my heart <33

I give it as the Best Poem 3nodding whee



OH__monichi
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LilSquee
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commentCommented on: Thu Jan 01, 2009 @ 08:39pm
crying so sad but true


commentCommented on: Fri Jan 02, 2009 @ 02:51am
Hmm... reading this makes me want to shower you with happiness. ^-^



Konoei
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chasing flowers
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commentCommented on: Fri Jan 02, 2009 @ 10:31pm
surprised wow you did good
i like this poem kinda makes me wanna know what you were thinking
cuz i can see on how u felt.
ya know i feel kinda jealous now ur better then me xp biggrin


commentCommented on: Sun Jan 04, 2009 @ 03:39am
so sadd
but awwsumm



iLove_Casey IV
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