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Life Blinded by all the decisions we make Doing Life like everyone else Not knowing why we don't do things for our sake Why cant we just live life as it is? We never throw caution to the wind Always following the rules and examples Everyone looking as though in a bind They cant even try a little sample. Whenever they see someone with these Ideals All they can do is give a smirk and laugh While the people themselves are having fun And the only reply they give is a little sass Living freely to no end Having fun with companions and friends Oh how I wish I lived like them Freely as how life should be lived

Posted by: Sanoren Sun Jan 04, 2009 @ 08:44am

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Commented on: Sun Jan 04, 2009 @ 08:59am


	i feel the same papa<3 we just gotta let go sometimes(: show people how awesome you are and can be >.< its easier said than done but we can try! ;3 i love this one too heart i'm telling you...your awesome at this! you seem to have so much inside you! i'm glad your writing these peoms to let it out ^_^ and its in a beautiful way 4laugh

Commented on: Sun Jan 04, 2009 @ 05:29pm

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Commented on: Sun Jan 04, 2009 @ 09:22pm

Commented on: Sun Jan 04, 2009 @ 11:05pm


	I never knew you were good with poetry, and to add to that, you can RHYME too! I knew you were amazing! Good job ;D Oh, and they sound very depressing, are you emo Sanzous!?!?!?!! O;

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Commented on: Mon Jan 05, 2009 @ 01:40am


	:O Thats nice! hugs I want to live that life .__.

Commented on: Mon Jan 05, 2009 @ 01:52am


	claps bravo!! haha this one was really good too xD

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Commented on: Mon Jan 05, 2009 @ 04:54am


	Wow i used to be like that too but instead of writing a poem i just sat there doing nothing jk XD but still you really good at this dad like purp said X3 keep it up maybe someone famous might see it <3

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