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Hey-lo Wassup? Read me?
For A Dear Friend
This was inspired by a dear friend of mine who I know will read this and maybe yell at me for using the word 'little' and 'small' because she don't like being called those names. But she's just going to have to deal with it because friends teast friends at least in my book thats how it happens a lot.

I've been watching you girl through good and bad
I've watched you grown
Ive even watched you cry, scream, and yell

I've kept my eye on your girl;
I've even tried to be your sheild
I've tried to put happieness in your mind
but you keep pushing me away

I know you girl,
better than you think.
I've tried to keep hope in that sad little soul.
I've read all those love stories
I've seen all the sad little lies...
And now girl I think I'm about to die.

I know I can't give up on you,
belive it or not I've been through this too.

For someone your size I know your really strong,
You say pain is your only friend girl but I know it's not!
All I ever hear is 'I'm ugly' from you,
you wanna know what I think girl?
I think your pretty in your own little way.
get over yourself girl.

You have the heart of a lion
but you have the soul of a dove.
your tiny and fradgile
So, so hard to please.

Girl I'm tired of this, but I keep goin' on.
I'm your friend and I'm your guard.
If your ever hurt and you think no one's around,
know I'm here for you to vent out.

I don't want people to hurt your sore fradgile soul
I don't want them to keep you caged when...
I know if your free and let out,
you can do amazing things!
So girl, just listen to me for once.

you are going to make it through!
You are going to fly!
I'm here for you girl,
and I will be till I die.






User Comments: [4]
Xiao77
Community Member





Mon Feb 12, 2007 @ 02:50am


I have to say, excellent poem!

However, I think the very last line could, oh I don't know, be tweaked just a tad?
It just doesn't seem to flow, like...like a big rock in a river almost.
The last line is the rock, while the rest of the poem is the river.
So turn the rock into part of the river ^_^


K i t t y the black c a t
Community Member





Mon Feb 12, 2007 @ 01:25pm


yeah I know, but I had to end it there or I would go on and on and on with it. I'll try tweaking it today.


Drama_Freaks
Community Member





Sat Feb 17, 2007 @ 02:56pm


I luved it Kitty biggrin


xx_DarkestDreams92_xx
Community Member





Fri Apr 06, 2007 @ 12:13am


I loved it too.sorry it took me so long to commint sweatdrop
out of curiosty why have you replaced me, i barly even get to talk to you anymore, i'm not invisable you know...


User Comments: [4]
 
 
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