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so WHO WANTS ME TO POST SCENE 3??? It's the scene where the kids get kidnapped!
Alright, well, I'm posting it anyways!

SCENE 3:
Kids walking on the street looking tired, Lily dragging her feet. It’s getting late-ish.
Lily: I’m tired of walking.
Kate: I forgot how long of a walk it is to get to the grocery store….it seems closer by limo. [apologetically]
Raven: [stubs his toe] Oh, Jesus Christ, Kate, why didn’t we just get Bill to drive us?
Kate: Bill is a Dad’s chauffeur, Roger, not ours. We can’t just make him take us anywhere we want. I’ve explained this a million times! And don’t swear in front of Lily!
Raven: I won’t swear if you STOP CALLING ME ROGER!!!
Kate: Yeah, yeah…whatever you say…
Lily: My feet hurt…
Kate: Well, you wanted peanut butter and jelly! So we’re getting some already!
Lily: I know. Okay. I forgot about that.
Kate: [sighs]
Raven: Hey, I just remembered a shortcut, guys, it is right up around here…
Kate: A shortcut? There aren’t any shortcuts…what’re you talking about?
Raven: [sigh] Look, just follow me, okay? I’ll show you.
[They follow Raven into area around alley. Kate pulls Lily in closer to her protectively.]
Kate: Roger, where are you taking us? [a little nervously]
Raven: Raven. And some of my friends said they’ve used this passage before, it like, cuts out fifteen minutes of walking. [reaches rape alley] Hmm….
Kate: Roger…[glances around nervously] This looks kinda shady. Why don’t we just go the normal way?
Lily: No! I’m tired…I want to go a short way.
Kate: [uncomfortable] I don’t like it.
Raven: Relax, Kate, it’s quick, we’ll be fine. My friends have taken it loads of times.
Kate: Yeah, cause THEY’RE so trustworthy…
Raven: [shoots her an irritated glance]
Lily: [frowns and wrinkles her nose up] It’s smelly.
Kate: That’s the smell of your brother being stupid.
Raven: hey!
Kate: [laughs]
Raven: Look, let’s just go. [heads into rape alley]
Kate: [takes a deep breath and reluctantly follows him in, keeping protective arm around Lily]
Raven: [getting sort of far ahead]
Kate: Hey, slow down! [Crack comes from behind them and Kate glances back]
Lily: [looks back too] What?
Kate: Nothing….I just thought I saw something…
Lily [looks forward] Where’s Raven?
[Camera turns to focus down alley, where there is no sign of Raven]
Kate: Raven? RAVEN?! [Starts quickly down alley]
[two figures come out of sides of passages (Charles and Zoe dressed in black) One of them has an unconscious Raven]
Kate: What the-! [figure covers her mouth with cloth, other figure grabs Lily and covers her mouth too. Girls struggle, but then go limp]
[camera fades into blackness, as it is going, voices and vague shapes]
Figure: Let’s blow this joint....
Charles: [nods]
END OF SCENE 3