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I hate this poem cuz it sucks. but it's mine =/
Sweet child without parent, left by it own

Can you belive what will happen to her? it makes me frown.

See how pretty she is with her long dark hair!

Come on.. it's not fair!

Food is the only thing she dreams of at night...

If she wish to survive she have to fight.

An old man grabs her by her hair

Tricking her to follow him to his lair.

''Follow me don't be in fear!

I will give you some food poor dear''

She follows without even think

All she wants is food and water to drink.

He seemed so nice and caring

But he coulden't even talk without swearing..

That night she got raped and beat

She even got shoot in her feet...

She left the house one cloudy day

''Come back for more'' the man say.

She shiver, she scream and she cryes

Shaking in fear for even more lies.

She lost her brother, she lost her belive

She got no longer anywhere to live.

She have been raped, she have been beat...

She even got a gun shot in her feet..

A women saw her sorrow and hugged her close.

The child could sence her kindness in her nose.

''What have happen to you?

Is there anything i can do''?

The kid smiled and looked up to her with her face closely and near

She was a nice person, she had nothing to fear.

She answered with an angel's voice

''I'm glad you're a women... i'm scared of boys.

there are many things you can do

Just you will let me to.

Let me play, let me smile..

Take me to the sea for awhile.

I like seeing the blue shiny water flow.

I love to feel the wind blow.

It makes me see the good things that is here...

It helps me forget everything with a tear...''






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A n a l S e x x
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commentCommented on: Thu Jul 09, 2009 @ 05:42pm
;O ur rly good, i suck at rhyming.


commentCommented on: Thu Jul 09, 2009 @ 07:58pm
that was awesome!!!
-claps and calls an encore-
:]



iTofuu
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SmuggIer
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commentCommented on: Thu Jul 09, 2009 @ 08:04pm
awesome, i like it. heart


commentCommented on: Fri Jul 10, 2009 @ 02:07pm
LOL its been so long i have comment in your journal xDD
but the porem
WOW! awsome
its sad and horrible but then it turned out at the end is kindness and loving.
I love it, its so sweet. heart heart heart



The Blood Rose Petals
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