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Love kills
there i laid on the ground

coughing blood all around

did i got stabbed? did i got beat?

no, i just coulden't feel any heat

so cold as cold can be

there was only you i could see

you had only been stealing

this wonderful lovely feeling

i saw back in the time

when we smiled and jump on the trampoline

there was happiness, there was joy!

but i wonder... was i used as a toy?

maybe i won't ever know

but for sure. this is the end for the show

here i lay on the ground

with the blood all around

stabbed by a knife

i wanted to take my life

i had nothing left to live for

i coulden't feel it anymore

i looked up at the sky

i asked carefully ''why...''

the sky seemd to smile at me

was it real? it coulden't be!

an angel came down from the sky

maybe god wasen't a lie

she sat down by me

told me ''i will make you free''

she laid her fingers on my eye

farwell world... this is my last good bye






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Peace_Love_Icecream
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commentCommented on: Mon Jul 06, 2009 @ 08:42pm
How do you do it? This is incredible! These poems you write are beautiful, flowing, and realistic... You are amazing with words 3nodding


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