Nothing really interesting as usual. But I saw the snow falling yesterday and it got me in a poetic kind of mood. So I think I'll write a poem. It's not supposed to be great, but I'll write it for the hell of it. Ready?
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Here we go
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Millions of bright shards
Falling from the heavens
Each one cuts away at the human facade
Each one cutting deeper than the last
Releasing the spirit inside
It spreads infinitely across the universe
It has no boundaries
It has no memories
There is nothing now
Only the sound of a single snowflake
Setting down on the pavement
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Hmmmm......it sounded a lot better in my head. Well, that's what I think of when I'm tired. lol. I'll see if I can write another one because this one sucked. It might have been better shortened into a Haiku or something. Speaking of Haikus, I wrote one that my 8th grade English teacher thought was freaking amazing. Here it is.
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A steady river
Flowing through the course of life
Is a young boy's mind
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I don't get it, but she thought it was awesome. Anyway, I'll try to write another one for tomorrow or the day after that maybe. If you left some [honest] feedback that would be cool. And you could send me your poems so that I can get some inspiration. Maybe it'll evolve into song writing. That would be sweet. Rock On
-Gil
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