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Leading To The Path Of War
Leading to the Path of War

As I walk through the path
I feel my mind flutter by
i feel hatred and its wrath
So strong I may die

I hear the wind whispering
To stay far back
I dare myself to be enduring
The pain at the end of this track

I feel the end grow near
And here the cries of war
My heart starts to fill with fear
And I see the battlefield of gore

I get my weapon of choice
And put on my green suit
I look to see the opposing force
I aim and start to shoot

I hear their painful cries
And feel the sadness seeping into my heart
I watch as I see the death of many guys
A great war is about to start



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"I was worth nothing before...but now that my heart has turned to dust...I AM nothing..."




User Comments: [4]
MercilessSiren
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Fri Jan 25, 2008 @ 12:41am


this is such a nice poem .......................... crying imsrry did i hav 2 ask 2 cry i didnt think so! whee


Goddess_Selene94
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Fri Feb 01, 2008 @ 12:57am


Out of 1 through 10 i give this poem a 10! Whoo hoo! cool Very true and hits alot of important points. *two thumbs up* cool


~NYA~DARC~DARC~OUT~NYA~
a51anLanie
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Fri Feb 01, 2008 @ 05:24pm


thats so sad...i hate war..makes me sad..of all the ppl dieing and violance.
darn war..BUT!
I love the poem!Ur really good!!!And the rhyming!GOSH!!!lol


Mandy_Candy_2013
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Sat Feb 16, 2008 @ 07:51pm


you write so sad poems but u explain good points u are an awesome poet!


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