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I post my dreams, my stories, and my anger towards a certain topic. GO ahead, write whatever comment, rude or not, your thoughts are wanted. |
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Mesoshy
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Posted: Thu Mar 10, 2011 @ 07:29am
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Posted: Tue Oct 11, 2005 @ 06:05pm
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A nasty smell seeped through the barred windows as a small man in a hood, stood holding a key. This was no odrinary man, in fact, it was a goblin, in all its glory. Inside the cell, a creature, shunned into one of the dark corners, nearly gagged, tossing and turning with that horrid smell. "Dont you ever shower," he hissed through gritted.
The smaller creature laughed although it didnt seem a laugh. A snorting noise, much like a pig would make, circled the room unpleasantly. "That'd be no concern of yours," he replied, his voice high pitched, yet with a dark undertone marking the rasp in his throat. "What I would be concerned about, is your current situation. Or do you prefer being locked up?"
-Wonders if this approach is good for a second chapter-
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Mesoshy
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Mesoshy
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Posted: Tue Oct 11, 2005 @ 07:44am
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Idea Winter's Eternal Slumber
Summer's Reign
It has been once said that our lands had frozen over for a period of months and then became normal again. Some say that it happens whenever an angel dies. It takes a lot to kill an angel. It is nearly impossible if you dont know how. I guess somebody has the knowledge, since the first signs of the eternal summer are fading. The air is chilled, the wind speeds have picked up, the flowers are losing their colour. That may change but, there is for only one angel left that lingers in this world. She is all that they have left since the others that guarded the earths inhabitants have gone dead my mysterious murders that not even the creator knows about, until now.
One man, a demon, he seeks revenge on summer, for its ever lasting light, for its never ending warmth that he so used to tolerate and now hate. His name was Winter, and ever since Summer, the angel of the earth, was born, his life had been kept in the shadows. His cold supressed by her warmth, his happiness, drowned in light. Oh how he held the utmost hatred for angels. Before, they were much easier to kill since back then there were so many, unfortunatly now they were scarce. But, he has found his target, it took him many decades, but he found the lingering Summer that teased and tortured his desperate urges to cloud the world.
Now he wouldnt just do this alone, for he too was the last of his demonic kind. He had groups or men on his side along with his trusty follower Autum. Autum was a sorcerer who followed in winter's cold ways. He usually did all the biddings and protected the Demon from suffering the same fate that Winter wishes upon Summer.
Spring, however, felt the warmth comforting to her. She would protect Summer, as Autum did for Winter. Her powers were much like Autum's, only in a different sense.
The question is, will Summer's light forever shine on this earth? Or will Winter's frost put out the sun as water on a smouldering a fire?
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Posted: Tue Oct 11, 2005 @ 07:33am
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Mesoshy
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Mesoshy
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Posted: Tue Oct 11, 2005 @ 07:27am
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Eternity Unbound
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Eternity Unbound ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Please tell me any typos, and funny sentences, and any improvements in my structure. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Please read the entire thing before making a comment. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Please, enjoy. heart ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Eternity Unbound ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Chapter One:
The Yard
The owl, sitting peacefully in a tree, suddenly leaped from the branches and cast itself frantically into the starlit sky. The sound of trees ripping and swaying, and not just because of the wind, would have frightened any nearby creature. After the tree where the owl had been perched calmed, it was again disturbed as a small dark figure who tore through the forest in a hurry. It would be difficult to get anywhere in this forest, as its thick trunks make it so that anyone passing would have to squeeze their way through. But it was not so for the dark figure. It was fairly small and quick on its feet, though it was a wonder why anyone would be running around unprotected at this time of night.
Creatures both foul and horrid, wandered around, looking for, and often, catching prey. Goblins, for example, roamed about this forest seeking mischief. Though it wasn't just the Goblins that many feared when traveling; they usually stayed in mines, built deeply, and sometimes under mountains, most of their lives. There were far more dangerous creatures that one would not dare to run into. Vampires, werewolves, and some dark elves were among the kind that posed a real threat to one's life. Their urge to kill and destroy over powered any human like emotions they once had. They would show little mercy for those in their way. It was a wonder why the gods of this world called ---, would ever want such beings to exist among them. ((I have yet to think of a name.))
The threat of these creatures weren?t among the other, more important things that raced through its mind. Jumping and dodging across the ground, the figure had been more cautious of the inconvenient protuberances of the trees' roots and branches, rather than the danger that lay ahead of it. The whole forest floor had been covered in a thick layer of leaves and twigs, good for hiding any sort of trace or trap one may leave behind.
Picking up its pace, the figure leapt over a large stump in its path. A soft gasp rushed into the figure's mouth as the unsuspecting creature felt nothing supporting its feet. The ground fell beneath it, letting it fall endlessly, or so it seemed. Hitting the ground with a large thump, the figure looked around and winced as the pain surged throughout its body. Reaching up its shaking hand past its human like ears, the being pulled off the dark cloak hood that hid its unlikely face.
"Thought you could get away from me, did you?" Said a voice coming from a second cloaked figure that quickly took a place above where the first had fallen. Its cloak was a darker brown and a bit larger.
"You tricked me, Leobe," said a small voice, coming from inside the pit.
Leobe let a soft chuckle shake his shoulders as it bent down to help the fallen being, but as he did so, the moons light traveled the depths of the trees and past Leobe, shining its glorious light onto the first figure who was panting lightly.
"I am going to tell Mom!" She threatened after gladly taking his hand and heaving her feather-light body out of the dark hole. Now fully in the moon's light, the girl's features were more apparent. Her long dirty blonde hair fell to only to the back of her neck in a braid. Freckles scattered across her cheeks, and a little on her nose.
"Tell Mom what?" Leobe asked, challengingly. "That we took off in the night to play at the Yard? Oh what justice you will have." Leobe snorted, shaking his head, thinking about what they would do during the next hour.
The 'Yard' as most called it, was the grave of vampires that had been murdered by the slayers of their village. Children of the village had to read one of the grave stones, chosen by the club leader, to prove themselves worthy of their club. It was Leobe's little sister's turn now.
"Come on Sarah, we can't leave the others waiting long. Do you want in or not?" Leobe grumbled impatiently, peering around the forest for a moment and then back down at his little sister.
"Well who's the one who chased me into this pit in the first place?" Sarah retorted, angrily glaring at the cloaked boy. All Leobe did was grin.
"Alright, well let's go then. You have been assigned to Darr's grave stone. He is a vampire, staked because of the way he used to murder innocent little girls, such as you." Leobe teased, widening his eyes a little to frighten Sarah even more.
"Stop it you oaf!" Sarah spat as she trudged forward ahead of her brother. "I'm not backing down. Let?s just get it over and done with." She added with a forced voice as she glanced around the forest with fearful eyes. "I don?t like it in here. Its dangerous."
"Oh shush you, it's harmless. So far, we've only lost one member to a vampire. I think his name was Darr too!" Leobe gasped sarcastically, with a grin. Sarah threw her fist at his shoulder with much force and let a growl escape her throat.
"Shut up! I know you're just trying to scare me." Sarah said, almost yelling. Leobe chuckled at her reaction, rubbing his arm and shook his head as he sped up ahead of her to quicken their pace.
After only a few minutes of walking, the two village children came across an enormous tree that looked different from all the others. It rose up past all the other trees and had the thickest trunk. It was truly a magnificent tree, except that it had black scorches on its bark. "The tree must have survived a fire recently, that explains with the other trees are all much smaller and younger looking," Thought Sarah as she traced her fingers across the tree's bark and then looked up at her brother Leobe as he pulled off his cloak.
His hair was a dark brown hair, near black. He had no freckles, but even if he had, his eyes would attract anyone's attention onto them, instead. They were blue with a tinge of what looked like silver, like a whirlpool of mist, only someone had dropped a stone down the middle of each.
"I thought they would be here by now." Leobe said, looking around almost frustrated. "I told them to meet us at 2am! It's the festival of spring, all the parents are gone and it gives them free access out. What could be keeping them?"
Sarah shivered and hugged her cloak closely to her body. "Maybe...they got them." Sarah suggested and immediately Leobe shot her a foreboding glance that made Sarah feel as if she was sinking into the leaves.
"Sarah, don?t be stupid." he snarled.
"Stupid? Who's the stupid idiot who decided to have the members come to this place anyway?" Sarah said leaping out of her cloaks tight grip as her feet left the ground, just a little.
Leobe snatched up her arm quickly and gripped it tightly as he whispered harshly into her ear.
"Listen Sarah, if you want to be a part of this club, you might want to show the leaders of it some respect! You?re lucky that I convinced them to let you join in the first place." He said, letting his hand slip from her arm, leaving Sarah tearful.
"Ok, I'm sorry, I just thought there was a better way," she whimpered and fell silent for what seemed like hours. All through this dreadful wait, frightening sounds of the forest were getting to her. "So who are the leaders?" She asked, trying to push the paranoid thoughts out of her mind, but she only managed to push them back further where they could easily corrupt her again.
Leobe thought a moment, tapping his right temple. "I believe it is Tye and his girlfriend Brekke." He replied as he once again looked around. "Ok, well it?s been ten minutes and no Tye or Brekke. I think we should go without them." Leobe urged, desperate to get it over and done with.
"Are we allowed to do that?" Sarah asked cautiously.
"Sure we are, as long as you have a club member witness, then you're fine. Now let's get going to The Yard so you can read Darr's tomb."
Leobe gripped Sarah's quaking hand and pulled her lightly as they went. As they crept across the leafy forest floor, a soft mist, floating just barely above the ground, became visible past a group of trees. They were nearing and as they did so, Leobe felt that he had to tug Sarah a little harder to keep them moving. Sarah had begun to stare straight ahead of her in fear, rarely blinking or even breathing regularly.
Sarah's fingers trembled more and more as she neared The Yard. She had never been in it before, but she has heard many tales, some of them horrifying enough to give her night terrors.
The mist soon swirled freely around their feet, nearly reaching up to Sarah's knees. The air was cold and it had a damp feeling as it lightly caressed her face. The trees in this part of the forest seemed lifeless; there wasn?t a leaf in sight, only the ones on the floor beneath them, but even they seemed to crunch unlike before. Sarah rubbed some of the haze out of her vision and stared blankly to what lay ahead.
The tombs were all in a row, perfectly straight. Some had been cracked and even pushed over, but the ones that interested Sarah most of all, were the ones that stood tall. Sarah felt her legs move themselves to one of the tomb chambers. It was made purely out of concrete. Even the mischievous little gargoyles on each of the corners were made with it. The carving of them looked so detailed, Sarah feared that they would suddenly leap off of the chamber and go on about, living!
Sarah jumped a bit as Leobe brushed shoulders with her as he past. Taking one of his fingers, he pressed it lightly at the top of one particular grave much further away from the larger chambers.
"This would be Darr's tomb stone. Hurry up so we can go back home. It?s freezing out here," he said crossing his arms over his chest, shivering.
Sarah nodded and took her place in front of the tomb while Leobe backed quite a bit away, almost out of sight. Sarah was meant to do this alone. Glancing down at the tomb, Sarah spotted engravements of what seemed like handwriting, or some sort of design. Lowering herself down to its level, she lightly brushed away the dried leaves and twigs.
Sarah began to read. "To whom," she began, but stopped as she saw another figure scurry across her vision. "Oddly fast for a human," she thought to herself, assuming it had been either Tye or Brekke. Looking back at the tomb, Sarah began to read a bit more. "This tomb represents...? Just as she began, she felt the paranoia return to her. Quickly she whipped her head around, looking for Leobe. He was still there but he too was looking curiously at where the dark shadow like figure had ventured.
"Is it Tye?" Sarah shouted to Leobe, but all he did in return was shake his head.
"No" Both Brekke and Tye are shorter. I say we check it out," he added, making his way slowly beside his shaking sister and then toward where the shadow had cast itself.
"Check it out?" Sarah shook her head in protest. "No Leobe, I'm almost done this tomb, and then we can leave!" But all her efforts failed. Leobe pressed on, quickening his pace to a normal walk. Sarah searched the forest for an explanation, but decided to scurry along side her brother.
As they both neared cautiously, a great smell traveled into each of their noses. A look of grimace swept the both of their faces; the stench was almost enough to persuay them to turn back. When they had both cast their glances at what they had found, everything went silent, their stomach turned unpleasantly and their eyes never once blinked for a very long time. Sarah quickly pulled her hood over her eyes and leaned herself onto Leobe.
There before them were two small cloaks, almost completely hidden in the grass. Leobe bent down and pulled both of the hoods, confirming his thoughts he made just moments after seeing the bodies. Sarah quickly pressed her face into Leobe's shoulder, shivering with disgust and fright.
"Dead," Leobe muttered in disbelief as he had cast another regretful glance at the bodies. Their faces had been a silver-ish blue colour, their lips white. As Leobe took a closer look, he noted the two holes on each of the body's neck. "Vampires," he muttered and Sarah turned to see for herself. Tye and Brekke were dead.
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