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My Story, The Legendary Twilight REMAKE
A story by: Jackie Braze
Chapter 1
The sun was about to set down from the Akabi Village as the humans were about to sleep in their nest, all comfy and cozy on their blankets. In the other hand, Moon (Gaia name is moon 1) felt irritated about leaving the world just to do the deeds of God, he shook his head thinking about leaving the home he once know.

" Hey Brother!" A red-haired teen started to open Moon's door, but it wasn't what he needed then and now. " I'm just starting to get an idea." Moon started to smooth his short, spiked silver hair as he listened. " We're getting out of this village and live somewhere else!" Moon's mouth dropped open. " wha... wait.. ARE YOU CRAZY?! I'M NOT GONNA LEAVE ME HOME JUST LIKE 'THAT!'" He yelled with anger, but his older sibling didn't have the time. " Look Moon, I ain't gonna go up to the skies and be like ' Oh, I'm so superior let's kill this son of a d**k!' I WON'T GO!!" Moon slapped his face. " Komodo, what are we suppose to do? Can we just tell them we don't wanna go?!" Komodo ( Gaia name: komodo14) didn't want to listen to his prediction. "I already did, Father won't listen." He sighed, Moon scratched his forehead.

Komodo has a point.. but we can't just leave our home village and go to the new world i mean... what can we do? So I'm only a dumb moon god while he can fly with fiery wings. THIS SUCKS!

" Anyway I'm going, and I'll bring my stuff since Dad is a good censer." he skid off the door, leaving a silver-haired, blue-eyed boy behind to think of a decision. " I guess I'll go, i mean.. I'M A 14 YEAR OLD GOD FOR PETE'S SAKE!"

He opened his closet to find his outfit he planned to wear to go to the heavens. His outfit was as blue as the midnight. He had the black armor made out of fine steel, his shorts went down to his lower leg but it's silver brightness fitted the small armor though it was barely noticeable. Moon shook his head and decided to get them on before he goes out. The armor though he left out, so now his long midnight shirt and sliver ankle pants were his to the taking.

" So your coming along?" Komodo had his long, flame robe with fiery wings and sword as huge as the Anime character's Tetsuiga. Moon snickered at his brother. " Dude, we're just running away, not going to a 'fancy' party."

" This is all i wore last night anyway, gotta keep myself hidden." Komodo flipped his reddish-orange hair away from his eyes. " Though the robe is freakin heavy, after all i can't leave them behind, i mean THIS OUTFIT'S AWESOME!" Moon could understand that, it's expensive this time of era. And it did have fire patterns and it fitted his sword, wings, and definitely his hair. " Let's just go." He ordered his 16 year old brother, and they both escaped their peril lives together.





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