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a poem! Check it out!
Hey you guys, here's a poem I wrote about two years ago. I thought this would be a good starter. It's called:

"Peace Is Like A River." K, feel free to read on, if you like.

Peace is like a river.
It’s flow, flying like
The ebb of the tide.
It’s nice for us to
Reside in peace!
Oh look at this spearing,
Balm.
Notice the radience,
That which is calm.
For this is proof that
We’re truly residing
Within inner peace.
We’re learning to accept
The fact that reality
Is not at all like
It seems. For notice the
Radiance of the moon-
Beams! For are you going
To believe all that you hear? That is not
Very wise, dear.
For although you may
Have this flowing river
Of peace. Man, look at
This war, it has not
Yet come to cease,
For the peace, peace
Is the message that
Needs to be spread.
Peace needs to fill
Everyone’s head. For only
When all realize that
Fighting and violence is
Not ok. Only then, will
Peace be allowed to
Stay. For when we
Witness peace witness within
The stars, we’ll understand
That we can achieve world – peace, beyond
Mars. Therefore, let’s strive,
Lets reach for this goal!






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commentCommented on: Sat Jun 16, 2007 @ 07:54am
Pretty interesting concept. Peace would be a very good thing to strive for, but we have to make sure we knock out the whole violence and other nonsense. Anyways as for the poem, it was pretty nice, flowed like the river XD hahaha. As I said before, it was a good subject to put up, hopefully it'll touch someone out there, and at least bring one person closer to peace. Well anywho, like to see some of your newer stuff, you should post it up.


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