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Random Chaos!!!!!!!!!!!
I put whatever intrests me here
a story about you.......
you walk down the hall and peer through a dust coated window. The darkness you see feels like its suffocating you. You stagger back in the wall across from the window. You cant tell why but the window feels like it radiates evil. You grabbed a book from a nearby table and throw it at the glass. You hear the sound of the breaking window. You plunge your hand through the broken pane not caring that the jagged glass cuts you. Your hand disappears into the darkness. Not sure whether it is still attached to your wrist, you continue with the only way you can think of to leave this mad house. You lean further out the window and feel your body leaving the floor. The few moments of weightlessness make you smile. You hit the pavement with a satisfying crack. I begin to smile. "Another one has been taken by the house" I say and continue down the barren sidewalk.

Hope you liked it. I thought of this during mid-terms.






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grotesquekreeple
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commentCommented on: Tue Jan 23, 2007 @ 06:47pm
I've had a dream similar to that before. Except the house was a mental institution. And i only dreamt the second half.


commentCommented on: Sun Jan 28, 2007 @ 11:31pm
I like the creepy atmosphere. Could use more detail but then again if it had more detail it wouldn't be you rstory it'd be mine. In short....I like it 3nodding



Talamascan
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