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This is just a regular journal about my life....yeah...that's about it...
I'm feeling......creative.....
Hello again, today I worked on my Golden Sun fanfic a bit, I'm currently on Chapter 6 of it. Anyway, I'm gonna post a bit of the first chapter to show you what it's like, please leave a comment telling me what you think! 3nodding

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(Oh yeah, a quick note, This fan-fiction mentions several psynergy that aren't in the game, "Comet Quake" is an example. Please do not think that these psynergys are in the games. If you have beaten both of the games like I have and see a psynergy that you have never heard of, it is most likely one that does not exist in the games. Thank you.)

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<center>Prologue</center>

It was a warm day in the town of Vale, Isaac was outside training with his friends...Garet, Felix, and Jenna. All the battles they had gone through seemed like just a bad dream. The village was finally rebuilt and everything had returned to normal. However...no one could of guessed what trials awaited Isaac and his friends. For a traveler was looking for them, and he had only one thing on his mind...the death of Isaac.

<center>Chapter 1
Catching up
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"Okay guys! Get ready!" Jenna shouted holding up her hand.
"Don't expect me to go easy on you Isaac," Felix said.
"Likewise Felix," Isaac replied. Garet was leaning against a wall watching.
"Okay! GO!" Jenna shouted, Isaac and Felix rushed at each other with their swords out. Their swords clashed several times, Felix then jumped back.
SPIRE!" he shouted. As soon as he said it a spire appeared above Isaac and fell but Isaac dodged.
"Not bad," Isaac said, he then raised his hand. "QUAKE!" The earth then shook, Felix barely was able to stay on his feet. Felix then jumped into the air and slashed at Isaac when he came down but Isaac rolled out of the way and triped Felix. Isaac then put his sword to Felix's throat. "I win," Isaac said smiling, he then sheathed his sword.
"Shoot," Felix said getting up. "I'll beat you one day Isaac."
"Hey, your good Felix, if not for you we definitly would of definitly lost that battle atop the Mars Lighthouse," Isaac told him.
"Do you have to bring that up?" Garet said walking over to them. "I'm still freaked out by the whole thing."
"Heh, sorry Garet," Isaac said.
"You know, I still can't believe we survived that battle atop the Mars Lighthouse," Jenna said.
"Yeah, I know," Isaac said.
"Okay, that's enough! Come on Isaac, let's duel!" Garet shouted pulling out his sword.
"Okay Garet but I won't go easy on you."
Meanwhile in a town in the far north...
"Who's that?" a man asked as a young blue-haired girl approached the town, two children then ran towards her.
"MIA!" they shouted, they stopped in front of her, Mia smiled.
"Hi," she said holding her crystal rod.
"I'm so happy you made it back!" the little boy said happily.
"We've been taking good care of the villagers while you were away!" the girl told her.
"I'm sure you have," Mia replied, she then smiled. "It sure is good to be back in Imil...it hasn't changed one bit..." Mia then jumped and looked behind her. "I...I just felt something...a odd feeling..."
"Mia! Come on, we wanna show you something!"
"Huh...I guess it was nothing...ok I'm coming!"
Meanwhile in a town to the south...
"Welcome to Kalay!" a villager said as a blonde-haired boy and girl entered through the gates. "Oh! Ivan! It's wonderful to see you again! You sure have grown!"
"Thanks," Ivan said.
"So this is your hometown Ivan?" the girl asked.
"Might as well be, Sheba," Ivan said.
"It's very nice," Sheba said. They both then walked towards the manor at the end of the road where Lord Hammet lived. They walked inside and Sheba suddenly stopped. "I-Ivan...some-something's wrong..." Ivan turned around.
"Sheba?" Sheba then grasped her head and seemed to be in pain. "SHEBA?! WHAT'S WRONG?!"
"OH! My head...something isn't...NO! NOT HIM AGAIN! HE'S STILL ALIVE?!" Sheba shouted, she then screamed and fell to the ground.
"Sheba? SHEBA!" Ivan shouted shaking her, but she did not awaken.



<center>End of Chapter 1 and Preview</center>

Heh...looks like I posted the whole first chapter instead of just part of it xd oh well, if you want to read the rest then PM or IM me, also if you have some advice or a comment you'd like to give me then leave a post here please 3nodding Bye!






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Shiroi_Kaze
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commentCommented on: Sun Feb 06, 2005 @ 05:35am
*is hypnotized* I like the story very much! 3nodding I've beaten the first game, but havn't got around to buying the second. sweatdrop

I love your style of writing, quick-paced and easy to follow, a writer after my own heart. Oh, and by the way, your signature is beautiful! whee

EDIT: ALL of your signitures are beautiful! sweatdrop

*is un-hypnotized*


commentCommented on: Mon Feb 07, 2005 @ 01:53am
Thanks! biggrin



FoxyAreku
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Saniya
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commentCommented on: Sun Feb 20, 2005 @ 02:53am
--was hipnotized to leave coment @_@ --

i didn't read it 'cuase all i saw was the end and now i've got my yaoi mind in activity...'cause my boyfriend told me about this anime where they guy chases him around and he was immitating him and it was extremely funny x.x


commentCommented on: Sun Feb 20, 2005 @ 05:04am
I don't think I've heard of that.. confused



FoxyAreku
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Sexy~Monkey
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commentCommented on: Wed Mar 02, 2005 @ 02:45am
*appluades* Woot for you! Great story, it makes my little fan fics look like, well to tell the truth crap. Yeah I suck at writing xp

Horay for Mars!

So does this hypnotism stuff work for you all the time? @-@


commentCommented on: Wed Mar 02, 2005 @ 10:30pm
I guess so blaugh



FoxyAreku
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Neko-Yumi2
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commentCommented on: Tue Mar 29, 2005 @ 08:51pm
I love it! I think its really awsome! whee


commentCommented on: Wed Apr 06, 2005 @ 10:14pm
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it



FoxyAreku
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Tears.Lyci.Tears
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commentCommented on: Sun May 15, 2005 @ 02:23pm
eek heart eek
....!Must Read More!....


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