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god says humans were a joke
the poems that are thought of as i lay awake at night waiting for the light of day
a poem to make up for the last one i did


they walk qiutly along
as he takes his hand in hers
her cheeks begain to turn red.
he leads her under a tree
were they lay for an hour
talking about how life
and how he wants to
spend forever here in her arms.
he decides to take a chance
and leans over to kiss her lips
for that brief seccond he saw
his life intertwin with hers
he pulls away and watchs her smile
as they lay back down
in eachothers arms






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Cruel_One
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commentCommented on: Fri Nov 10, 2006 @ 05:53am
god, I love you're poems, they're so smexy! ^^ heart


commentCommented on: Sat Nov 11, 2006 @ 12:37am
*smiles little* i love it



mnemosyne_moon
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salune
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commentCommented on: Sat Nov 11, 2006 @ 02:13am
thank you hehe you two always read my poems for what ever reason thank you guys alot it makes me happy that some one likes somethings that i do


commentCommented on: Sat Nov 11, 2006 @ 04:56am
** i like this one the best.. it's so sweet and caring.. and really shows everyone the heart that you have... i love it!



rriverr
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salune
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commentCommented on: Sat Nov 11, 2006 @ 04:58am
damn your right i have a heart well what ever then who cares if i have a heart i am glad you like it


commentCommented on: Wed Nov 22, 2006 @ 04:27pm
its great



mnemosyne_moon
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