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My Horrible Day//Entrie #2
As I sit on my boulder I listen to the wind... So quiet and calming. Sothing my nerves and drying my damp and dark thoughts. As I remember what my memories were I try to block them. It started to rain, hard. So cold and unwelcoming on my dry and tender skin. Remoistining my thoughts that were once dry and sunny.



"Kouga, would you mourn my death?" I asked sitting in his lap. He replied " I wouldn't want you to die but if you did, yes I would be really miserable" "Would you miss me when I'm gone?" "Yes Dearest" "Do you even love me?" "What a silly question. I will always love you."



Sadly I belived him. "What a liar." I thought as i clenched my fists tightly. Then realizing I cut myself with my nails I released letting the drenched thoughts flood my head and letting my blood drip slowly out of my body. I sat for awhile. It still rained and still was cold. I have caught my boyfriend with a plenty of other girls. I was furious and fustrated. The lightning cracked. He was cheating on me... Filled with envy, I sank into my thoughts that swelled ino a river. While in my darkest daydream a shadow passed over the ground. I was possesed by my dream to notice. Filling with wrath, Kouga appeared and bandaged my hands lovingly. After he was done he turned and gave me a kiss on the cheek. I shuddered and turned the other way. " Don't be mad dearest..." Before he could finish I screamed with anger: "Dearest? DEAREST? WHICH ONE IS DEAREST? KAGOME? AYAME?" I paused " Me?" I said in a small tone. He sat there shocked then took my carefully bandaged hands and said: " I may like the other women, But you will ALWAYS be my lady." I stared at him trying not to cry. "Tha..Thats the sweetest thing you've said!" I hugged him hard. The wind came again and blew the dark clouds away bringing forth sunshine. Intantly turning my thoughts into gas and escaping my mind. He set me in his lap and said "Youll always be mine." My heart melted like butter. I replied "Same here dearest..." Then it ended with a kiss. heart



Thats my kind of poetry and my first piece too!!! 4laugh sweatdrop






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Ryoko Ookami
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commentCommented on: Thu Sep 07, 2006 @ 05:23am
I love the way you wrote this. It wasn't story like (with many details), but it was poetic. If I could rate it from one to ten.. 7. That's a really good rate from me. I'm a tough rater, but I went easy on you. You made a mistake in paragraph one and in two... and three. The hight rate was for the way you wrote it: like an artist, a poet.


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