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Angel's Scriptures
This is for me to write anything I want in. I'm going to post some writing I have done and write in more when I feel like it. You don't have to read it, but you might find something of intrest. Just one thing: DON'T STEAL!
Red Rivers
Warm, red liquid oozes from the deep gorges in the pale surface. Scarlet rivers wind down the long, thin path, away from the valley. Running downhill as all rivers do, even those of rose-coloured water.It glistens and glows, now the bright-hot colour of the evening sun, now deep ruby red, stone cold, crystal.
Suddenly, the land shifts, is pressed against another surface. The ruby rivers break their banks, covering the smooth planes.
As the surface becomes open to the air once more, salty raindrops splash down into flooded rivers, few at first, but soon becoming a torrent of huge, salt water droplets. They sting the land as they hit, diluting the scarlet rivers. And suddenly they are no longer beautiful, but murky, disgusting, seen for what they truly are. Death streams running from scarred land, the blood gushes out of the deep, clear, cuts, staining the pale, once flawless skin.
But soon the colours swril, collide, mix, like oil on water. Blood red, pale skin, distant colours of the earth below, a blur of tears. And darkness begins to obscure them, a black ink running across the sky. An endless night masks the disgusting beauty. A death night. Never to be lifted again.

Hehe. See if you can figure out what it's really about.
It's not particularly good, written at 1:30am, but I like it.






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dino x saur
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commentCommented on: Tue Jan 11, 2005 @ 05:25pm
Is it about painting or drawing of some sort?

>.<


commentCommented on: Tue Jan 11, 2005 @ 08:22pm
when i read the first paragraph i though of a volcano, then you said cold andso i thought of a river of blood, which kinda worked out. i like the way you introduce the different aspects of the 'river' gradualy. it creates (in the form of blood) the pain, slow death. this is imagery and is ll around groovy!



lil_lady_em
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Dante Kidrouk
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commentCommented on: Wed Jan 12, 2005 @ 08:37pm
...erm...well the thoughts in my head were of suicide...slit wrists...heh. sweatdrop i knew it wouldn't work


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