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Requiem In Red
Oh snap! Lookit this!!
A Child's Fury

How could you ever do this me?! You snatched my life away!
With your immortal's blood you changed me, and night became my day.
You sought to appease me with pretty gowns and expensive dolls
It worked for a while, for this eternal child, until my nature called.
The tantrums that I threw! Oh how this Dark Gift made me thrist!
It was then you saw your Sweet Daughter Death at her very worst!
I frightend you! I frightend me, yet I persisted with my child's demanding
And not even you, my father dear, could stop me by commanding!
I learned the story of my rebirth, and so my hatred grew,
You denied me what I wanted most, and so a plan I drew.
I poisoned you and slit your throat, and still now I show no remorse
It's what you deserved, after all, and this is my discourse.
The pretty portraits on the walls are lies! That was never us!
What could have, should have been is nothing more than dust!
And you, who stood idly by, with your sorrow and your tears,
Haven't tears enough for what you've done! Forever a child of ten years!!
You abandoned me! And so did he! And left me there to burn!
Well, you'll see just what a beast I'll be, now vengence has it's turn
My father of lies...
And you too, my sweet Louis...


Stay tuned for the second half! ^_~

And if you steal, I will hunt you down and murder you in your sleep. ^_^






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Tsalagi1923
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commentCommented on: Tue Jul 11, 2006 @ 12:00am
Bravo!


commentCommented on: Tue Jul 11, 2006 @ 05:10pm
I found it interenting. It is not my favourite genre, but as a poem it is quite nice.



Lord_Cochrane
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[Whiplash.Girlchild]
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commentCommented on: Wed Jul 12, 2006 @ 02:25am
Very nice! This sounds lame, but the words you use in the rhyme scheme work really well. And of course I love the subject! Hehe.


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