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Not yet Named By: Daimos Amatros Endangered people please make way I'm trying to live another day Ranting, raving with my voice I'm going to hell, I have no choice My life is doomed, I have no time Others are doomed too, but they follow the mime Rotting away, our minds slosh to mud If Christ died for me it was a waste of blood Another day, I have maintained to live Avoided being sucked down hell's sieve Ever ending church days, I knew they'd never last Goodbye god, heavens a thing of the past. Monkeys to men, that's how we became Its a lot more to go by than Christs seven-day claim One day I'll grow old, eventually die That's all there is--no euphoria in the sky

Posted by: Daimos Amatros Wed Dec 15, 2004 @ 05:12pm

Yellow is so not write like grammar
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Commented on: Thu Dec 16, 2004 @ 12:27am


	I must say this is very well done.I love the style,manner and theme.^_^ heart

Commented on: Wed Dec 22, 2004 @ 07:05am


	Personally I think this is much deeper than I thought it would be.Not that I had any lesser expectations.I love this.

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Commented on: Wed Dec 22, 2004 @ 05:52pm


	i love you poem, it flows really good. And it's way better than my dark poems. wink

Commented on: Tue Mar 01, 2005 @ 02:09am


	wai I love it! it's really preetyful sounding!! heart blaugh huggles you MWHAHAHAHA

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Commented on: Sat May 07, 2005 @ 07:05am


	That's Beautiful.

Commented on: Wed Apr 11, 2007 @ 05:28pm


	that poem is amazing! Youre good!

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