I'm that kind of friend
That's gonna overdose today
The one that's always too high
To have anything sensible to say
I'm that kind of friend
That wears his shirt sleeves long
Because if they rolled up just a bit
You'd see that something's wrong
I'm that kind of friend
That's gonna sleep with everyone
The one who's laying on the floor
Thinking "Oh God! What have I done..."
I'm that kind of friend
That was in the news yesterday
The one they say went missing
But I actually ran away
I'm that kind of friend
In the hall, you always pass
The one you never recognize
But I sit next to you in class
..I'm that kind of friend
That's gonna take his life tonight...
The one who's call I'm sure you 'missed'
And who cant do anything right
Yeah, I'm that kind of friend
You know? The one that's always blue
Oh wait, I guess you wouldn't know
Because I'm just some dead guy you never knew....
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I like the second to fifth stanzas the most. They have nice flow and language in them.
I might have written it as "but sits next to you in class" instead, but you create poems in such a way that syllables are practically irrelevant. XD
I have weird issues with how words stack up against each other, if that makes sense.
All in all, I really liked the idea of this one; a person with so many bad habits and life problems that referred to them self as a 'friend' but turned out to be 'just another dead guy.' I really enjoyed this one. :3