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a story i wrote in elementry and got a B on it
Bang as i land on what seems to be the floor fully awake and in pain. mother comes rushing threw the door to see if im ok. amazingly enof i was ok, but not james becuse i landed on him. As we slowly get up mother says " hurry up or well be late". a little latter james ran so fast he forgot we were on the second floor and fell down stares and mother yelled at us from a distance. we made it to the car were my mother was whating impatientlty, when we got in the car james slamed the door on his hand. now that we finaly got to the place we were going to witch was a hicking trail that we found some time over the week and desided to go there this weekend. the trail happens to be a large hill like thing, as we were getting out the car james fell out onto a red ant hill. halfway up the hill i told james to pay attention were he is walking but he ignored me and trip then slid down the hill and i shook my head at him. when we got near the top nothing happen to james yet but i thought that not going to last long, then we got to the top and james was struck by lightning and slid down the hill but he survied. me and mother was amazed becuse that was 3rd time that happen to him. when we left the hospital with james he got run over my a old blind lady in a wheel chair. after we left the hospital a second time we went home. THE END
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