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The Deltonian Chronicles
Chapter 1: The Fate of a Nation






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Lokumun
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commentCommented on: Tue Feb 21, 2006 @ 10:47pm
Tell me if I have any spelling errors, and I'll fix them right away. Thanks. wink


commentCommented on: Tue Feb 21, 2006 @ 11:19pm
I'f you're confused look at the Prolouge. I changed a bit. razz



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Zithias
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commentCommented on: Tue Feb 21, 2006 @ 11:35pm
Hey i bet he never gets the sword and dies trying muahahaha just kidding


commentCommented on: Wed Feb 22, 2006 @ 12:46am
as lokumun speeds past the gate he passes roan."hi lokumun were ya goin" said roan. "im gonna go get this sword thingy to kill the evil emperor" said lokumun.
"oh him I already killed him someone hired me too" said roan. "really" asked lokumun."no I just like to mess with your head hahahahaha" repleid roan.
"well good luck with the sword thing, until then you can have my old sword."
"I though it broke" said lokumun. "no I fixed it......on robs head hahahaha."
said roan. "bye roan bye rob." said lokumun then he ran off. "ummm other diretion." "oh ok thanks" said lokumun. then he ran off.
after words rob spontanously combusted. the end....... or is it dun dun da.
just kidden but that would be cool mrgreen



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