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the dark abyss
So many girls in the world yet.... so many different personalitys
they pass by me and my heart aches and twitches
am I in love?... or is my heart playing tricks on me?
my head aches and it swirls and yet I look into the dark forbidden abyss
full of people and all different.
Whenever I get near them I get quite..*thump thump*
whats that sound *thump thump* there it is again and yet... I can't recognize it.
Is it the heart beat of a fire that burns or the cold drum that plays in the dark foersts coldly playing a song of pain and doom?
Sorrow is more like it for thats what people feel the day after tomorrow.
Still I feel like I walk,walking an empty road that leads nowhere
The stars take shape and create the night sky spreading all over while the moon brightens the dark so its bitter coldness won't take full effect.
Thats all I ever felt I knew a dark and cold bitter world that was in black and white.
knowing every step I took and every stone to come I decide to look up and there in the horizon a light shines brightly.
Quickly swiftly brought off my feet my body unwillingly goes towards it and there I see the most precious thing ever wanting to keep her all to myself and not give her up.
Her hair shines brightly her eyes glowing with a light so gentle.
Holding her she looks up at me and says" I love you"
Looking down at her I say " I love you" looking in each others eyes, A flame sparks.
Up to the sky we fly and fly and fly till we hit the sky and there for a million years we dance and live happily amongst the other stars in love embracing each other in our orms burning and light brightly in the dark night sky.






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Xx_Shinigami_girl_xX
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commentCommented on: Thu Mar 25, 2010 @ 03:50am
crying that's beautiful..i'm actually crying xd crying
love ya commenting back on something like you did on my poem. heart


commentCommented on: Fri Mar 26, 2010 @ 12:05am
I didnt think it was that good I though person or two might have hated this really horribly or everyone else



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