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The Trident War
This where my story is going to get recorded, I may not post in regulation but hopefully enough people will read my story
Episode 3 - Just a simple task
"Don't we already have enough people in this group as it is?" A Man spoke out in protest "Let alone he doesn't even have his abilities awakened yet" He added as a woman walked up to him and placed her hand on his shoulder "Relax, Lee" The woman said in a soothing voice "All we're doing is a simple patrol, we will most likely not encounter any enemies" she reassured Lee. Lee looked as if he was in his mid-twenties and stood about almost 6 feet tall, wearing a jet black business suit, it appeared that he used to work as a lawyer before the war broke out "Where is he anyways?" Lee asked Gus.

Gus turned his back to Lee and the woman "I'll go get him" He said as he walked off to retrieve Leon.

Lee looked over to the woman slightly with a defeated look on his face "Why don't we ever anything interesting?" Lee asked the woman. She was only a few inches shorter and at least one or two years younger then Lee, she wore a traditional ravers outfit complete with chains, bright and dark colors and the like.

"You know our time will come" The woman said as the child walked over to them "We're getting someone new!?" The child said excited "Is that true, Becca?" The child asked her, Becca laughed "Yes, Cody" Becca replied as she looked up to see Leon and Gus walking back "His name is Leon. Please don't give him a hard time, okay?" Gus said as Leon approached the group "Hello" Leon said calmly as Lee extended out a hand as a friendly gesture "Nice to meet you Leon." Lee said as Leon accepted the friendly gesture and gave a firm handshake "My name is Lee, This is Becca and Cody" Le said as he motioned over to each person respectively.

"Okay, Leon you will joining them" Gus said as he nodded towards Lee "They'll fill you in on what their assignment is" Gus said before walking over to the table in the middle.

"Alright, let's go" Lee said as he headed towards a ladder that lead to what it looked like a sewer lid. Becca and Cody followed Lee as well as Leon and they were soon back out into the ruined city "We are to check the north end of this city, move down to the core and back here." Lee said to Leon and soon after Lee started to walk with Becca by his side "Just a simple patrol? well, at least they don't just send us in to fight..." Leon said quietly, having a little respect for Genesis now that he knew that they don't send everyone to fight right away and possibly die "I heard that" Cody said, sticking out his tongue childishly as he ran to catch up to Lee and Becca and Leon followed close behind.

After about an hour of walking and usual stops that they made, Leon noticed a weird marking on the wall of a broken down corner store and walked over to it "What's this?" Leon asked as Lee walked over to examine the marking and looked around "They've taken over this area?" Lee said, only a little shocked but knew it was going to happen "Watch yourself, this could be an ambush" Becca added as they started to look around as they walk.

Lee noticed something was wrong when he turned around to see Leon had stopped walking for some reason "Leon, come on!" Lee yelled out. Leon looked over to Lee "I can't!" Leon replied as another group appeared from different angles and surrounded Lee, Becca and Cody. "We finally make a catch today huh?" One of them said then laughed a little "I guess we did..." Another one said. All of them wore the same uniform but in different styles, but they all had the same symbol imprinted on them. it was a traditional school uniform but dyed black with the symbol in red

"How did Shadow take over this area that fast?" Lee asked as the one who looked to be like the leader walked over to Lee a little "Wouldn't you like to know." He responded as he looked over to his comrades "Let's have a little fun, eh?" He said as the others nodded with smiles on their faces "There's one for each of us at least...no more sharing" The leader said they each walked over to someone.

The leader got into a fighting stance and motioned over to Lee "You can call me...Jecht" Jecht said as a small gust of wind started to blow. Lee took a deep breath as he took into his fighting stance, but when he stomped the ground a small crater appeared "Heh, you ready?" Lee asked.

Another man walked over to Becca but someone else appear out from no where "Back off, Ray...I got this one" Another man said as Ray sighed "Fine!" Ray yelled as he looked over to Cody "I get the easy one?" Ray looked pissed but the suddenly changed when Cody started to grow a little bigger, his fingernails grew longer and sharper and wolf-like ears popped out "Who said anything about being easy?" Cody said.

A woman approached Leon and looked at him with interest "Hmm, this one is kinda cute..." The woman giggled "Alexis is the name, make sure you remember it...Well, after this dance you will never forget it" Alexis said as she took over her clothes until she was down to her underwear "Come one, little boy...show me your moves!" Alexis said as she swayed a bit to begin her dance.

"Great...Why do I fight the stripper?" Leon said with a groan as he realized that he could move now but wait to see what Alexis could do besides being a strip tease.

Lee smashed his fist into the ground and pulled out a giant piece of the road and threw it right at Jecht but the wind blew stronger and for some reason sliced the chuck of road to bits but behind that Lee rushed in with a kick to the chest which send Jecht fly but the wind caught him and set him down gently "Well now...looks like Genesis has some decent people after all, this might get interesting" Jecht said as a tornado started to form "Good! I was hoping so" Lee said with a smile, looking over to the tornado

~Episode Three End~


Authors Comments: Alexis....yeah, I know...But the Idea of her character came from Air Gear Character Mimasaka Ryou A.K.A Gorgon Shell.

Aside from that, I do hope I'm getting better. I'm finally getting action and fight scenes in which makes me happy and again any comments or suggestions just drop them in here or PM me






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Simple Imperfection
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commentCommented on: Mon Jul 06, 2009 @ 10:26pm
You still have some writing errors, or is it supposed to be like that?? O-O Oh man Dx


commentCommented on: Wed Jul 08, 2009 @ 09:02pm
You have a few typos here and there. I suggest reading through your past chapters and this one and fixing them because their a bit obvious. The feel of the story is great, your doing a great job and I like the stripper XD keep it up your doing an awesome job~



Ana Yamazaki
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commentCommented on: Mon May 02, 2011 @ 03:50am
I decided to read the rest before commenting again. I think you're doing very well and your writing has improved just with each Episode. I will agree with everyone else in that you need to work on some spelling and grammatical errors, but you have the makings of an excellent author. I hope you'll leave some comments on my story in my Journal. Maybe we could work together on something! I would enjoy that! Good luck with your story!


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