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breathless night part 2 Well my name is jon and i dont have any family. Infact i'm the reason my parents are dead. It all started when i first noticed the other world or in other word the demonic world. We were driving along when i was seven and i yelled out " DADDY YOUR GONNA HIT THAT MAN!!!!" he swerved not know what to do and we crashed in to a tree. I woke up unharmed and the cops sent me to an orphanage. From then on I went to school and walked back till i turned fourteen. When i turned fourteen i ran away and ran in to a kid named josh. He looked at me " listen jon i know who you are and you must come with me" i look at him " or what?" he smiles and pulls out a gun " or you die." Needless to say i went with him and i met a man name Brian Inferno and he smiles at me " welcome jon and get ready to learn your true power." Well if you want to know more your gonna have to wait for a later time. till we meet again . in the depths of twilight and mortal sin my strength grows enter my soul...... enter my ..... VOID

Posted by: demonicjon Fri Jun 26, 2009 @ 08:26am

in the depths of twilight and mortal sin my strength grows enter my soul...... enter my ..... VOID

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Commented on: Fri Jun 26, 2009 @ 09:56am


	Okay, read both parts, I must say highly spiffy. Ignoring grammatical errors it's pretty great! As for the grammar it takes practice, the more you write the better it will be, so keep on writing! Also, would you mind if I told some friends about this? I think I know at least a couple people who would enjoy this... Check out what I've been working on irl? Bump if I glow?(takes you to a reply box) Picture of me available on my deviant art (linked in the thread above) if you care about that.

Commented on: Fri Jun 26, 2009 @ 09:19pm

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