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my feelings and story
im just a kid
most ppl say im rediculous
but i think there rediculous
must i testify
must i rip your life
out your body and make a new damn child
hush hush dont cry
waipe your tears
open thine eyes
lift thine voice and pray to god and be be happy
say say daddy say say mommy
say say ha ha tthen say toy toy then say say truck truck
then say ******** ******** then say money money then say
wtf is goin on in this god damn buildin
ima take a gun out drive by on parris hilton
make my self a millionare then end up in jail then bust out sell some weed then end up in jail again
listen young ppl of the earth i know you can't hear me or see but
if you dont wanna turn out like a bum you best fear these words of wisdom that i write
think of me as confucious
so let there be light
i know this is a poem but it feels like a rap
so stay back before i spit words at you like a flash back
im just freestylin at the moment before i end up kicking and and beatin my family members in the stomach
or better yet kill myself or better yet run away i tried once but idk what made me stay
and my mom said hey idc about you anyway go ahead runaway its not like you were much of a son to me anyway ill be livin in this house happily while sitten back crying for me you little a** crack
i shouldve said something but i feared i would get too henous i shouledve stayed on the front steps and sit there and prayed
but instead i go back in my room and destroy my items an get all mad and scream im so sick tired of this and then that was the day when my poetry became born i was such a beast at this s**t i deserved a reward so my poem was written in a book it was called lock inside this house
ppl felt my emotions and knew what is was abotu so they decided to say ok we will give this id a grade so they put in page 67 so my poem can get the praise i was raised not by just my mother but aunts and grandma
and then at age two i cried for my momma so i came back to new york and said yay momma what a stupid idea that was how dum.






User Comments: [2]
L8DY-N3KO
Community Member





Sun Jun 21, 2009 @ 01:59am


this is good


Blubunny11
Community Member





Mon Jun 22, 2009 @ 12:02am


wow u wrote like about 10 poems this week! ur thoughts r really understandable. keep at it its like ur born with poetry. >.< lawlz (dont know wat that means lol)


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