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Shade7
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(I donyt know, anysuggestions on what to name it)
Here I lay under the dark sky
Nothing but darkness all around me
I don't remember ever telling my light goodbye
I've been her so long I've forgotten what's it's like to be free
At times alll I do is yell out into the dark abyse
Hoping that soon my light may hear
I walked around thinking about what i miss
I look at al the scars I bear
Thinking of what I've done
Thinking you have or slowly growing apart
My healing hasn't yet begun
I place my hand occasionally over my hurting heart
Missing the piece that fits in the gaping hole
I wonder if anyone can see my pain
And wish you would make me once more whole
Every time I see you, I struggle to my true self contain
In side me thinking I'll be nothing more than a annoyance
As I keep my head lowered
I think of how to gain acceptance
I will never be a coward
I'm never ever needy
Yet I'm not always needless
But when it comes to you i can become a bit greedy
But here i am and here I ahsall remain to watch over you....in the darkness





User Comments: [2]
missthang2829
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Tue Mar 17, 2009 @ 11:35pm


i reallyyyyyy love this one heart its very sweet


Lynnie609
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Wed Apr 22, 2009 @ 04:51am


Wow, that was really, REALLY deep. Even though I'm not much into darkness themes, I really like this poem. I also saw that dark love theme you hinted at. There's a good mixture of feelings to this poem. Again, great job! ^_^


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