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Short Strings and Things
Hello, you are about to enter my journal, my head and some of my deepest thoughts, I hope your ready for this because I know I’m not, leave a comment if you dare, share with the class what you think and maybe I’ll get back to you. . .
Never Get Away. . .
Never let me pull you down
Creeping into your heart
No one can ever stop me
You shall fall
When I pull this knife across your throat

You pull away
Never let you go
Can’t pull away
Violently killed
By my hands
You can not believe it
Why will this happen to you

You are bleeding out
Bleeding out forever more
On to the floor

Bleeding out . . .

Can . . .Never get away. . .

Post Permanent Link Silent Vampyre · Tue Feb 24, 2009 @ 07:06am · 3 Comments
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    Silent Vampyre
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    Tue Feb 24, 2009 @ 07:07am


    I don't quite know what I was thinking when I made this one ^-^ but I was listing to "Falling away from me" by Korn when I made it.
    Ahh-RealSwagger
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    Tue Feb 24, 2009 @ 11:45pm


    *Gulps and touches hand to throat* O.O;!!
    Bell . . . Bella? P-please don't kill me. . . ?
    JKJK! I thought this poem was awesome, the brutal straightforward-ness of it literally sent a chill down my spine. I like the rhythm of it, as this is always something I look for in a poem - a good rhythm. This has it, I believe.
    Honestly, I think it is now one of my favorites of your work.
    5/5 stars.


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    Wed Feb 25, 2009 @ 12:46am


    Wowzers! thank you Sweet V x2~! xDD I really like it myself but more importantly I'm happy you enjoyed it!
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