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My poems :]
This is my journal of original poems Aiming for 100 of them! :]
Confused
Today you seem so confused
No one to turn to wherever you go
Felt as though no one cares what you do
You lay down crying yourself to the bone

You wander around everywhere
Looking for someone to hold you tight
Wanting to feel loved and needed
Yet no one ever appears anywhere

As you lie down wanting to know who you are
Asking what you should do
Someone comes out to you
Hugging you closely and warm

He tells you to cheer up
That everything is a part of growing up
That there's no need to rush everything
And not to worry about anything

He says that you have friends everywhere
They care about you
And they love you very much so
So stand back up and start anew

As you hear these words you realize what is right
You get back up straight before the new night
And walk this straightforward path
Where you know your never alone because of your friends










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TheresaGoeSRawR
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commentCommented on: Tue Jan 06, 2009 @ 12:36am
awwwwwwwwwe :heat:
Papa, that was beautiful!!
i really felt as though you knew more than i told you(:
i loved that, && i love this poem heart
thank you so much crying
i love you<333
it really made me cry...
>.>
<.<
crying emo


commentCommented on: Tue Jan 06, 2009 @ 12:53am
Awe crying crying crying

Sis dont cry your gonna make me cry

Its a really pretty poem Dad <3333



OH__monichi
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chasing flowers
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commentCommented on: Tue Jan 06, 2009 @ 11:38pm
this is a nice poem
you've become really good at writing poems
i'd love to read another one


commentCommented on: Fri Jan 16, 2009 @ 01:14pm
I luv it,
heart touching too!
^^ Meh proud of chu Leo-san!



XxiHuGgLeZ - JoShxX
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Lady_Gyneth
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commentCommented on: Sun Feb 08, 2009 @ 11:03pm
*tears up*
I love this poem. It describes how I feel right now.
Thank you for coming up with this poem and letting us read it.

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