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Seeking someone: a story by sinlesschick6
chapter two:Confusion and pain

So i guess these guys are not kidnappers, there killers! And im soppose to be dead right now.
When we reached the out doors i panicked because i thought i was going to be killed, so i tried to get out of the tall mans hands. But i soon relized it was a waist of my time because i couldnt get away when i fell, my legs were broken. So Bernie just looked at me, smiled, looked into the sky, and then picked me up and put me into the back seat of the car. Then he got in the seat in front of me.
For about ten minutes it was silent, until i heard the front door slam. Mike came stomping in the snow talking to him self. He sat in the drivers seat and took of his gloves. He looked at me through the mirror and turnded and said that i should make my self confortable, yeah right.
I knew nether one of them had a plan. So i guess i was lucky i wasnt going to die tonight.
The whole ride Mike was yelling on and on how the plan was ruined and that they couldnt get payed.I saw Bernie look at me in the mirror then at Mike and told him that my legs were broken, how thoughtful.
That made Mike furious becauuse that was all Bernie cared for. "she's going to die any ways, what do you care!" Bernie looked at him. And then they were silent.
The rest of the ride Mike was looking at me in the mirror. It gave me the creeps. then i did the dumbest thing that i have done in my 13 years of living, i asked him to cut it out.
Mike face turned so red that it looked like it was going to explode. And as fast as he could he pulled over on the side of the brigde.Then he slamed his door, ripped he out of my seat, and threw me to the ground. He dragged me to the egde. I couldnt move and my body was freezing.
And then a terrible pain apeared in my legs. Then Mike lifted my head to show me that he was crushing my broken legs. They started to snap like twigs.Then he yelled "do you want me stop, do you want me to stop!" I just looked at him with fear in my eyes. "Answer the question!" he crushed harder. So i nodded. "To bad!"
The pain was terrible and just got worse.
Then Mike"s face hit the ground. And i looked up and saw Bernie standing there with both his fists ready. Then he picked me up and put me back in my seat.
When Mike came back his left side of his face was bloudy and bruesed, it started to swell. He didnt say a word. I wanted to laugh but that would have got me killed.

Next time chapter three: The Plan






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Aelita-SeinNarblar
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commentCommented on: Wed Jul 30, 2008 @ 01:42am
cool! Is there gonna be a guy in it later named Casey? XDDD joking


commentCommented on: Wed Jul 30, 2008 @ 06:26am
[[[damm]]] it was good i like
it.. its was [[flippen.fresh]] cant wait till chapter three!=]
mrgreen

lots of love [[nani]]
<33 heart [[peace]]



yougothackedbad
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commentCommented on: Wed Jul 30, 2008 @ 03:54pm

nice!!!this is awesome!!! xd i can't write anything like this cause...well righting isn't my thing lol,drawing is rofl Text at the end of each message


commentCommented on: Thu Aug 07, 2008 @ 03:24am
Loven it



Nerdalous
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