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Depressing Poetry
Please comment I would really appreciate it. I want to be a poet someday.
All I can do is wish,
Wish for this life to end.
You have been killing me slowly,
And more painfully then any torture known to man kind.
You have killed me from the inside,
Now the cancer is spreading outward,
Eating away at my crumbling body.
Everyday I slowly decay,
More and more chunks fall from this broken person,
Do you even notice?
Do you even care?
I am disappearing,
And leaving to be buried,
Into the cold,
Hard,
Ground.
The ground that did nothing for me,
But kept me standing while you threw away my heart.
Crushed it to the ground and yet you had no sympathy in your eyes.
How can one person be so heartless?
Wait, arent I heartless?





Confussledlover
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    Methendar
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    commentCommented on: Tue Jul 22, 2008 @ 04:52am
    ok, 1: very very very well done, 2: you is not be heartless, 3: Very very nice word choice


    commentCommented on: Tue Jul 22, 2008 @ 05:01am
    eek eek eek


    U = heart heart



    xFlaming Sorrowx
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    Confussledlover
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    commentCommented on: Tue Jul 22, 2008 @ 07:14am
    Well saying that he stole my heart makes me heartless in this poem so idk it just worked...


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