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TRUE LOVE

"During the night and in the moonlight are the shadows of your past......where souls of light lie beneath the very thing that you most treasure in your life...your one true love.
Her face is a smile in your eyes, she holds you and crys away your fear in loosing her to the angry souls in the mist that lurks in every path that you travel upon to the light in which you seek true peace and happiness!
But what would ever change in your life, if the one you love would disappear in the tears of sorrow that drip from your sadden eyes.If only tears could bring her back to you, if only your laugh would make her sing.
Her laughs echo in the silence that fills your empty soul. The silence lingers to the very whole that once lay true love to her, that is now empty as she left you alone in this world.
But there is hope.You believe she loved you in many ways. You believe that she wanted you to be happy when she left this world for another.Her tears, that once fell off her soft face, are the raindrops that fall from the mighty sky.Her laughs, are the roaring winds in the towering trees.Flowing through the leaves as ocean waves in a powerful hurricane.Her smile, is the very thing that lights up the sun and the moon.
You believe,......in TRUE LOVE"


mystical_blue_angel
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TRUE LOVE
this is just a little short part of my little story so please read comment and enjoy!
and if u want, tell me what u think i should add and you'll be i the story!
if you want though!





User Comments: [11]
AkoTheShadow
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Mon Jul 14, 2008 @ 10:19pm


that is so cool i loved it i was speachless threw the whole story very good i just loved the way everything was said i would never come up with something like that never in my whole life


x_xspiderxqueenx666x_x
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Mon Jul 14, 2008 @ 10:37pm


OMG! i love it! XD


emo hinata hyuuga 458
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Mon Jul 14, 2008 @ 11:34pm


that'z the best story i have ever read! I love it^^


kohoro
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Mon Jul 14, 2008 @ 11:53pm


hey you love the story its turning out well ^_^


Twisted Cross02
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Mon Jul 14, 2008 @ 11:53pm


I dont know what to say, it was very good


Perks of Being a Cat Lady
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Tue Jul 15, 2008 @ 03:00am


Wow Hannah.
That was awesome.
The only small thing was that I think some of the sentences were a little bit long.
If you shortened a couple of them it would flow a bit better.
Other than that, it was amazing.
Better than I could do.
You should definately write more

biggrin


XxiamsupermanxX
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Fri Jul 18, 2008 @ 06:52pm


wow thats really good u right that?? u should hav it published well if ur not done u hav to wait lol ^_^


callofdutyrocks
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Mon Jul 21, 2008 @ 03:21pm


Hmmm. I get a comment for a friend request from someone and find they have the same passion for something as I do. I am also writing a book and would like it if you would add me to your friend list so we may converse over writing ideas. cool ninja


Albino BlueJay
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Sat Jul 26, 2008 @ 08:12pm


nice story. if its a full story, u could make a good author.


GrimmBullet
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Fri Oct 10, 2008 @ 09:24pm


wow...that was the best thing i ever read...im putting that on my profile if its ok with you.


kohoro
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Sat Jan 31, 2009 @ 04:05pm


those ae interesting to read. you should begin a writing career. you are pretty good at it ^_^


User Comments: [11]
 
 
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