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hi guys! well i got some feedback so here's another chapter to the story.

CHAPTER 2:

I awoke and there was my mom watching my every move. I couldn't quite remember what had happened but all i knew was that my head hurt. And it hurt bad.

"Oh honey! Are you okay?", my mom exclaimed as i came back into consiousness. Next thing i knew is that my mom yelled for a nurse.

"Oh young Jeremy! I see your awake now. Well, let's get you some water and some medicine for your head. I'll be right back. Just lay down and try to stay awake until i come back.", the nurse said as she walked out. For the next five minutes my mom sat by my side and stoked my hair as she reminded me of what happened and why i was there. I nodded and at the end i stared at the wall and sighed.

"What's wrong honey? Are you in any pain or having trouble breathing?", his mom said with a worried expression on her face.

"Nothing mom, except this type of thing always happens to me. Did this ever happen to you when you were young mom?", Jeremy asked as he looked at his mom curiously. His mom looked at the celing trying to remember. She got a look on her face, but just as she was about to speak the nurse came back inside the room. Sje gave him some water and some advil for the pain in his head. He had stitches so he's have to be careful when brushing his hair, itching, washing his hair ect..... But, they wanted to keep him there a while to monitor him. They wanted to make sure he didn't have any fractures or anything. They said that if everything went well he could return home in two days. Later on i was just falling asleep, but then Rose walked in! She turned to the nurse who nodded and left the room. Rose looked around and then sat down in a chair across the room.


She looked around for a few minutes. Apparently he was the one who had to do the talking.

"So...... any particular reason why your here?", Jeremy asked trying not to sound rude. I mean besides his mom she was the only person who came to visit.

"The guys were wondering how you were doing. So was I. We were all getting worried, but the guys chickened out because they thought you would be mad at them so they decided not to show. They want me to tell them what your condition is.", She replied.

"I see. So, when did you guys call 911?", Jeremy asked.

"The guys didn't want to because they were scarred and you know how they don't really like you all that much. So, I did right after they were done complaining. Which, was in about a minute.", She replied.

So, maybe she did like Jeremy! He was happy about this thought. maybe there was somebody else outside his family that actually cared about him. That was until the guys showed up five minutes later. Then his thoughts were interupted........

So tell me what you guys think about this chapter. Anyways byez! and remember u only get another chapter if u like the chapters written.