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DETENTION: An unfinished story by yours truly.
~Origin~

Date: 3/28/08

After reading a few stories written by a friend of mine, I began to wonder. Why didn't I finish that one story that I had written a few years back?

The story was called "Detention". It takes place during the end of the school year and was about three students: Andrew, Jeanine, and Kai. All came from different cliques. Andrew was a skateboarder and troublemaker. Jeanine was your typical "hot" cheerleader. And Kai was a grade A student who seemed to be very quiet and serious.

They all meet in detention because of various acts that they did earlier that day. I can't remember what Jeanine did to get herself intro trouble, but I do know that Andrew started a food fight and that Kai was being a smartass towards one of his teachers. Anyhow, they all meet in detention and start conflict between each other soon after.

After a while, the teacher disappears to go do something and the three students start to wonder why and go investigate. My story ends there.

I think that I should complete this story now that I brought it up. Actually, funny thing. I just remembered that this story is based off an awesome RP that I had participated in on Gaia 4 years ago. Oh well. sweatdrop

~Avatars~

Date: 9/18/09

I've decided to create avis based off the characters I created, and hopefully, purchase art of them in the future.

Andrew, Jeanine, and Kai

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~Inspiration~

Date: 9/18/09

Note: RL stands for "real life".

Andrew was inspired by my real life friend of the same name. RL Andrew was a good friend. He was fun to be around with, and was always smiling. Andrew's best friend was Julian, and as a pair, they were both quite the pranksters.

Jeanine was inspired both by a RL Jeanine and one of my old friends, Jade. RL Jeanine, was my friend Danny's girlfriend, and she was also a cheerleader (I think captain) at his high school. Jade was a girl I had a crush on, and its her attitude that I'm using for Jeanine. Jade was really pretty, quite flirty, and playful as well.

Kai was inspired by both me as a kid and Kai from Beyblade. When I was a kid, I was very quiet and always tried to maintain good grades. The name Kai, was of course inspired by the character of the same name from Beyblade. Also, Kai was a very serious character on the show, always dedicated to training his Beyblade and on winning.

~Main Art~

Date: 10/1/09

And finally, here is a magnificent group picture of the characters of Detention!

Drawn by the wonderful Ingenious Indulgence.

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~Other Art~

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Chibi art of Andrew done by raeberry.





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