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Dont be afraid of the dark be afraid of what it hides.....
''Id bleed for her!''
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I wrote this poem about a girl at school that I loved but she hated me.I would have done anything to have her.But she was in the popular group and I was in the outkasts and revolutions group.She refused my offer to go out. So I left her alone for a few weeks.The conclusion for this is in the sequel ''Words Cut Deep'' witch is the next poem.So.... enjoy.

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''Id bleed for her''

Blood is the rage deep within my wounds.These wounds wont heal so soon.
I loved her with love that defyed gods and demons! Yet she despises me so yet I still love her!Oh! What Have I done to deserve this fate!It is so very hard to anticipate.

I would bleed for her!I could be free with her!I could have stared into her eyes forever!Now that dream will be never.

I do not cry simple tears.I cry with that of sorrow that smeres.I cry blood!I cry pain!I cry for fear and rage! I t dosent matter its all the same!!!

I long to find someone one day, that will cry with me. Someone that will be free with me. Some one that will bleed for me.

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Gypsy_of_the_Night
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commentCommented on: Wed Mar 26, 2008 @ 09:02pm
wow that is really deep...i loved it....each word was soo honest and meaningful...
it was very beautiful. thank you.


commentCommented on: Thu Mar 27, 2008 @ 02:06am
this is still my most favorite poem, its tragedy is what makes it so beautiful. but had i been there i would have given you a hug to comfort you sad



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