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...umm
i am tired of always feeling this way
each and every single day
the feeling just grows and grows
and in my room the feeling shows
sitting there all alone
my voice gets to be a certain tone
and that is when you actually know
that i am picturing me as your foe
i love you even though you make me cry
and sometimes you make me feel like i should die
i seriously doubt you will see
what this feeling is doing to me


hummm idk if this is good or not but it is just how i feel sweatdrop






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sarithorg
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commentCommented on: Tue Mar 25, 2008 @ 06:41am
wow this poem is really good. it's a very sad poem but still very good.


commentCommented on: Wed Aug 06, 2008 @ 09:53pm
ok well this is my first comment as your opinionator
it is a good start and i think you can go somewhere
this i can tell is an early one so yeah
but i also think becasue it is an older one its a tad bet choppy in the middle and it just sounds a little too much teen angst
but i like it



PunkRockVampyre
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