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i wrote this the day i broke up with my real boyfriend (the one in real life not gaia)




I see you standing there
Reminding me of a ferocious bear
Slowly tearing me apart
Little by little their goes my heart
Now I don't love, Now i don't see
How anyone could EVER be a part of me
You say you hate me you don't like me at all
Your hoping that after i will bawl
You see me and i see you
We don't know what to do
I look deep into your eyes
Then remember all your twisted lies
I run far far away
Hoping i will never ever see you again someday



i didn't know what to name it if you have any suggestion's plaese tell me

comment my poem tell me what you think

this happend yesterday well that is when we broke up sad






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xxXNight_WhispersXxx
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commentCommented on: Thu Mar 13, 2008 @ 09:38am
Sorry about your boy...
But keep on going, you going to find someone ells soon
Nice poem heart
It Flew right into my heart...


commentCommented on: Fri Mar 14, 2008 @ 08:50pm
the poem is pretty deep :[ but inspiring at the same time
and that part 'How anyone could EVER be a part of me' you know thats not true...you just had a bad experience dont judge yourself so hard :[
hope your feeling better..



up ur butt
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GoodnightLove
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commentCommented on: Fri Mar 21, 2008 @ 10:57pm
:]
Who was this Boy?
Now, you gots me and marrcusss.<3
i love you kat, dont worry bout silly boys that do things like that to you.
whatever he did proved he didnt deserve you.
Your too good for him.
Loveyaa. <3


{Nicepoem}


commentCommented on: Sun Mar 23, 2008 @ 07:28pm
i also have up ur butt (i wish i knew his name)i love all yall! yall are to go to me i don't deserve yall.



Jinxed_lette
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bobboy696
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commentCommented on: Thu Apr 10, 2008 @ 09:47pm
i think it should b named "shattered" crying


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