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hey there this is a story i made up for my class well more like a poem
welp here goes
this is a story from a solders point of veiw on the ww2

guns firing people dying almost every day i lay down in w8in for my time to go away,
as i lie there my heart is beating a way the gun shots blasting near my ear tho im slowly
dying my friends come near,they say im gonna make it tho in my heart im not


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later on as i lay there silent only felt the tears of my men but in triumph theve won the war and all is peaceful and now as i lay in flanders feild hearing the guns burst by i lay there silent but tho i have died my dear wife and daughter keeps me alive today and so now im not far away

ok now this is a request kind of thing this time if u want to hear about me and a ghost just send me 4 pms k

ok well my bro and mom dont believe me but the house i live in is haunted yes i said it rite haunted any ways so im just in bed when i hear a voice calling me it was goin like roberrrrt roberrrrt u know the normal stuff that u would expect in a horror movie so any way i was up and i hear that voice so i said what do u want then the voice gose like... GET OUT OF MY HOUSE!! i felt a cold chill come down my spine and then i saw a skull a floating skull now i was scared but it was going for my kitten quin and shes asleep so i lunge in front of it i took the hit and man it hurt i was bleedin badly but then some how i stood up all i could see was quin licking my hand some how she knew i was trying to protect her (this is all true none of it is fake) so any way i confronted the thing. then my head started to throb but i attacked anyway oh it hurt alot so icovered my wound while protecting quin it lunged at her again i blocked the way there was something strange about it tho y not go for my bro so i mustered up what strength i had and asked it said because u are week i want your family to suffer so i was pissed and i yelled in the name of our lord the savior i demand u to leave that was when i blancked out when i woke my gash was gone and i was standing my bro told me what happened when i blanked the thing went for my heart mouth opened and then as it bit down on me it screeched in painand burned up this is true none of its a lie


ok well have you ever went to school and know your going to have to do something unpleasant to day like fight a bullie or get a crappy mark on a test well thats what i go thrue every monday to friday thats one thing that seperates me from the others im a primary fight target so i usually end up bleeding but i win the fight im not always victorious but i have never lost and if your confused in some cases ive been sent to the office well any way my tactics are kicking i dont have a strong punch but my kicks are fast and powerfull so any way i gotta hurry up my moms being a b***h oh well any way so ya im strong when i need to be ya i know its braggin but oh well im not trying to i ran out of ideas lol any way bye

as u might know i get into alot of fights and just recently i was in the hospital so i got out but my heads throbing any way thats all for now see ya

the life of one man can be a big diference in the life of the lover but over time that love shall die may not be for a while but in the end happiness is meager unless its with the person u love

the path may be long and some days times stands still but you will always find something new may be late may be soon but it will come when u least expect it even if the thing is bad or good it may last 4ever unless u spoil it.

in the end it is better to love someone then to hate for me thats the case alot of the times. no matter who thinks the thing u belive in is wrong just keep in mind that it is what u believe and no one can ever take that away from u. keep these things in mind when ever you are sad






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Electric_pink
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commentCommented on: Mon Jan 07, 2008 @ 05:15am
Thats awesome mate!!!


commentCommented on: Wed Jan 09, 2008 @ 04:09am
very descriptive and great word imaging if thats a word lol
nice



Itchiki
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commentCommented on: Wed Jan 09, 2008 @ 11:30am
that's sad. but you are alive and that'a all that matters. whee


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commentCommented on: Wed Jan 16, 2008 @ 01:46pm
Sweet but r u sure it was true but ay sounds cool...



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commentCommented on: Sun Jan 27, 2008 @ 10:17am
Hahaha how bout we forget this mistress thing and i just be ur friend eh? lol haha nice entry!


commentCommented on: Sun Mar 02, 2008 @ 07:32pm
U where in hospital, that must of been horrible!
Thinking of hospitals make my skin creep domokun domokun domokun
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Little Emo Revenge
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commentCommented on: Sun Mar 02, 2008 @ 08:08pm
OH BY THE WAY!WHO THE ******** IS SEXY_LEXIE13!IS SHE YOUR EX-GIRLFRIEND BECAUSE SHE IS SOME UGLY b***h!WHEN I READ YOUR COMMENTS, I WAS LIKE YOU DO NOT TALK TO TAMARI LIKE THAT!!!
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commentCommented on: Sat Mar 22, 2008 @ 03:14pm
this is really good babe. i love u soooo much! im srry u have to fight every day..... cry cry cry i love u



christsgirl3
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commentCommented on: Wed Apr 16, 2008 @ 01:14pm
I'M SORRY TAMARI!!!
crying crying crying


commentCommented on: Mon May 05, 2008 @ 06:29pm
Tamari can I meet you soon as possible please. At your house.



Little Emo Revenge
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xo-elisa-xo
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commentCommented on: Wed Jun 18, 2008 @ 02:42am
wow thats really something....=D, so anyways how long did it take u to write that whole thing? its pretty long!


commentCommented on: Wed Jun 18, 2008 @ 09:03pm
not that long i mean im very creative



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coolgirlLoL151
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commentCommented on: Thu Jul 17, 2008 @ 01:12am
dude i heart heart heart heart heart heart your pro its soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo cool cool so are you wink


commentCommented on: Tue Jul 29, 2008 @ 12:37pm
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