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Sex, Drugs and Rock and Roll
Man this is a old story.

Fred woke in a daze as he was mumbling to himself . He looks around he see’s grass all around only thing he see’s is grass everywhere no sign of anything other it. He closes his for just a second and opens his eyes (not knowing that he was sleeping for about 3 hours) he see’s a tree will a little swing and a little girl swinging. He walks up to the tree and asks the little girl “What is this Place she replies”t is whatever he intends it to be “ . Fred stands puzzled about the little girl said but then asks “ How did I get here”. She Replies “ Just how we all got here “ . He asks “ How? “. She says “ You will find out soon enough “. As she smiles he remembers someone who was very close to him . Fred blacks out and wakes up and finds him self in a daze again . After he comes to he see’s he is in a war he just stands there out of no where a hand grabs him and pulls him into a bunker . A man asks him “ Why the heck were you standing there ? ? “ . Fred is not all there at the moment and answers him saying “ I wanted a purple heart “. Then man replies “ For that ? ? For a medal that will wither in time that is a waste of getting your legs blown off?” . “ Yes “ Fred , Replied. Unknowingly, Fed stands up and gets shot in the legs and blacks out. He wakes up in the field and walks to the little girl and asks her where he just was. The little girl answers “I don’t know I am only six “ . Right at that moment Fred Remembered his daughter who was six years old last time he saw her . He asks her “ Who are you?”. She says “ all in do time”. Fred blacks out and finds himself in a cherry wood room he see a man that is in a tux and is sipping tea . Fred walk up to this aliquot man and ask him “ Who are you? . He answers “ I am you “ . Fred stands there puzzled and asks “ Come again? “ . He Replies “ I am you. Didn’t you here me before ?” Fred Stands there Quietly and just stares at the man as if he just killed someone. The man says “ I am quite busy can you please leave”. The man say’s “ I don’t know how to “ . The man says “ Just go the way you came” . Fred says “ I don’t know how I got here” . The man replies “ That is illogical “. Fred says “ Nothing is illogical there is a god in heaven that I believe will help let me anything I want to do “ . The man says “ Are you sure that is what he says? “ . Fred answers “ Yes I believe that is what he says “ . The man says “ You have a lot to learn “ . Fred blacks out and wakes up finding himself in the field once more. He walks up to the girl once again asking “ Who are you “ . She replies “ Remember that time you left your daughter at home all by herself while you went to get milk “ . He replies “ Yes “ . “Do you remember what happened ? “ She said . He fell to the ground crying remembering that fateful day . After he returned to his house he called for his daughter Hillary . He went though the whole house calling her name but no reply . He goes and calls the Police after they arrived hey told them the whole story . They searched for days and no trace . He made himself forget this whole thing ever since he kept it under wraps . Fred blacks out again and wakes up in the cherry wood room and looks at the man . “Why does this keep happening to me? ?” . The man Replies “ Why do you think when asked inside you, You can do whatever you want?”. Fred is puzzled at the question that he asked “ What do you mean, Who are you” . The man say “ The one you rebuked “ . Fred asks “ Are you God?” . The man answers “ Am I God to you?, or just someone who lets you do anything?” . Fred just stood there wondering what this guy was talking about . “ What do you mean???” He said. The man shook his head “You still have a lot to learn. Fred black again and awoke on a beach . The beach was full of shells but something did not feel right there . It felt to perfect the ocean wave where the same every time. The sea shells were on the ground perfectly the sand had no foot print at all. He sees a woman near the water weeping . He walks up to the woman and asks “ What is wrong “ . She Replied “ My Husband died here five perfect minutes ago, there was no blood he just died and now is gone”. Fred is pulled why she told this to him but asks “ How did he die “ . “ By a shark attack “ she said . Fred stands there still puzzled . “ Then where is he now “ He says . The lady answers “ Where everyone is after they die “ . “ Where is that?” Fred asks . “ Heaven I believe but a man once told me that even the greatest will go to hell but I don’t believe that to be true “ . Fred remembers one time when he was ten a man in the park told him something like that . Fred was only a young kid when he was walking through the Park alone this was the first time his mom ever let him go somewhere by himself . He met a man who look so joyful and wonder why he was so happy . He goes up to the strange man and asks “Why are you so happy ?” . “ Sit down next to me I want to ask some questions” The man smiled as he pats his hand on the bench for him to sit down . “ What do you want to be when you grow up “ The man said . “I want to be the man to discover the missing link “ Fred said . The man is surprised by the answer that little Freddy gave him but he asked “ Why do you want to be that? ”. “ Because I want to be rich and powerful ”. “ Why do you want that?” He asked . “ That is the only way to get noticed in the world “ Fred answered .






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commentCommented on: Thu Jan 03, 2008 @ 06:38pm
it is 2 long shorten it for less complex brains plzz


commentCommented on: Tue Jan 22, 2008 @ 12:58am
you should try 1st person narrative! Over all great job! biggrin



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commentCommented on: Tue Jan 29, 2008 @ 08:24pm
This is like from like 5th Grade it took like a week to write the rest just i have not really wanted to finish it


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