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A Dark and Dusty Tome
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(Poem) A Darker Shade of Night
In a world consumed by fright
There is A Darker Shade of Night
Where the shadows tend to bite
And where life forgets the light

And the men aren't bold
When the blood runs cold
Where the lies are told
And the truths are sold

And the children tend to cry
And some of us can fly
Where everythings a lie
In a world where we can't die

And the women sin
And the villains win
In this world we're in
Where the sun had been

The light won't rise
To the chilling cries
As the crow flies
Through the pitch black skies

The wolf is king
In the pale moons ring
And the sirens sing
Of the ravens wing

And magic is motion
In the velvet ocean
Of the minds emotion
And the bodies commotion

Where the fire burns
And the water churns
Where the wind earns
What the earth yearns

So please don't fight
Those of us who bite
Because without the light
Lurks A Darker Shade of Night






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-Originaux Luna
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commentCommented on: Wed Jan 02, 2008 @ 03:29am
Astounded.
Yes I am.
For I have been,
introduced to such a man.
A man with such wit and articulate
motivation, he give me chills; not
yet accumulated.
Can there be?
Such a person...
who brings joy through
his simple yet intricate
alliterations?
Yes, there is and I have found
him.
He's clever and I can tell just by how he writes.
I am hoping to become his accomplice,
because now as it may seem...
I am infatuated with Fevre Dream's... writing.

Oh, boy. You're such an amazing poet.


commentCommented on: Fri Jan 04, 2008 @ 01:22am
That poem. That was exceptionally outstanding in all ways.

You keep on amazing me, every time i read one poem, i go on to the next and think that one was even better than the last.

You have a real talent for poetry. Never have i known someone as astonishing as you. Keep it up.



Poetic_Indulgence
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BloodDoll42
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commentCommented on: Sat Jan 05, 2008 @ 05:02am
You are, dear artist, a Dark God among men. You never fail to amaze love. heart


Now remember, ALWAYS bring a banana to a party Rose. Banana's are good!
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