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~LET GO~
~helo this is a poem iv mad i wouled likw it if u tell me if it is good or bad~
~OFF~
small or tall
we'r all the same
when the lights ar off
rich or por
we'r all the same
when the lights ar off
red,blake,ornge,or white
we'r all the same
when the lights ar off
so mabey the way
to make every thing right
is for god to just rech
out and tern off the light...






User Comments: [3]
sweet_nice_guy
Community Member





Sat Dec 29, 2007 @ 04:39am


its ok,i like the meaning in it,but the rhyming not so much...don't be mad at me,i'm just being truthful smile


dreaming-under-the-stars
Community Member





Sat Dec 29, 2007 @ 04:51pm


i quite like it
well done


II-Clown-II
Community Member





Mon Dec 31, 2007 @ 05:23pm


i like it!


User Comments: [3]
 
 
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