HELLO WOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRLLLLDD!!!!!
I decided I needed to change my journal, because my other one was outdated.
This is scene two, for the benefit of Maya and Emma....and I don't remember if Zeta actually read it or if she just heard me telling Claire about it....
Scene Two: Bored
*camera zooms in after scene one on the image of us all talking and the sound comes on*
All: Laughing
Erin: *laughter dying down* God…this is so boring….
Janet: (hurt expression*
Erin: (rolls eyes) Not you guys, I just mean this winter break. I mean, seriously…the past three days, all I’ve done is sleep, talk, and drink Alex’s weird-a** purple-colored hot chocolate.
Alex: Well, I’m so-RRY it’s so “weird-a**” to you, but I personally think it makes life a little more- colorful. (pauses for effect, then laughs at her own joke. Sips from a mug)
Janet: Maybe we can bake a cake!
Alex: (gives her a look)
Kaitlyn: You know, I’m bored too. Let’s go to the mall and look for cute boys-
Erin: NO.
Kaitlyn: (sniffs) Fine.
Janet: Anyone want to pet Fluffles? (pets the cat she’s holding adoringly) Yes, you’re a good girl….yes, good kitty….pretty kitty...such a good girl….(yelps and jerks arm back) BAD KITTY!!!
Kaitlyn: (staring down her nose absentmindedly) My nose is obstructing my field of vision. I think it’s growing. *camera begins to switch from person to person*
Alex: I’m hungry.
Janet: BITCHY KITTY!!
Kaitlyn: (still staring down nose) Seriously, I think its like, deformed.
Erin: (shakes head in exasperation)
Alex: I kind of want some cheese. (to Kaitlyn) Do you have any provolone-y?
Janet: (sighs) Oh, its okay, kitty. (pets kitty, then looks stern) Just DON’T. DO IT. AGAIN! (breathes)
Kaitlyn: I’ve never really believed in plastic surgery….
Erin: (gets more exasperated) *camera moving from person to person faster and faster)
Alex: Maybe we can make fondue! Or like…a sandwich.
Janet: (to her cat) Did we have any English homework?
Kaitlyn: (jiggling her nose up and down)
Alex: (nods) Sandwich!
Janet: God, I don’t remember….(getting hysterical)
Erin: For pete’s sake, SHUT UP!!!!
(everyone turns and stares at her)
Erin: Jesus, you people are like a freaking three-ring circus act. (sighs and shakes head) Your nose is fine we don’t have any English homework let’s go get sandwiches. (speaking in a bored monotone) M’kay?
(everyone nods numbly)
Erin: Good!
End of Scene 2
Please let me know what you think!! And PM ME WITH PLOT IDEAS!!!
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Wait...did the kitty, like, bite Janet or something? And by the way, in the previous scene, you have Janet with a cat named "Mr. Tibbles"....if Claire has two different cats, we can use Anjali I suppose....I mean, since we're going to redo Claire's scene, we can have Claire at my desk or something, and see, Anjali LIKES looking into video cameras and such. So...we could do that OR we could just stick with the computer cat idea. Sorry, I'm rambling. ]
I LOVE Janet's character...and it's just so weird that I inspired that whole section of Kaitlyn's lines. I can't believe I said that. xd You're an amazing writer, Zo, and I'm REALLY excited to be working with you!
Dude....I'm SCARED about what part I'm going to give you. *whiny voice* I WANNA DIE!!! WHY CAN'T I DIE?! Oh yeah. *bored monotone voice* Because it's a COMEDY.