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long awaiting peace in my life
um i just like to write about nothing or peoms or even about my self and dreams
okay everyone remember's september 11th right well if you don't i will never forget what happen
i was scared
to much fear shot right through me that i could not even walk
if it was not for my teacher who is one of my bestfriends i would of never made it out of the school. he made sure that i was okay.
well any way this is not about me this is about those who lost people that they care about. my uncle was down there and i was afraid that he would never come back.
when he did i relized that what the people that have loved ones that will never come back. who will help them. who is going to stop there heart ache.
i wrote since then after i had stopped for so long it inspired me to help those people with my words because words can do alot for a person. even a person that has lost all hope .
well here is a poem if you lost someone you love on that day then here is a poem for you:
i wake up one morning
and the sky is dark
i wonder why
it feels this way
then i look
and we get that call
that plane hits
and a shout of crys
i break into tears
like a part of me
as been hit as well
my country is falling
as well as it faith
for all who are yelling
for the brave were coming
some jumped
some were burned
some got out
and others were there in the rumbel
i saw the pain
on face to face
hoping it was a dream
that was a nightmare
instead it stayed
the brave that have died
to try to save there people
others made it out
by the ones that are brave
barried under all the rubbel
under all the smoke
fires will blaze
plaster will fall
for a country is in pain
those brave that survived
under the rumbbel
came out to remember
the people that have died


please reply to tell me what you think of this or if you know someone that lost someone there






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Toshiko muyo
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commentCommented on: Fri Aug 17, 2007 @ 11:03pm
OMG! that was unbelievably awesome. god it made me really think of just how many of my own friends were directly affected my that day. thank you for such a wonderful poem to read. heart


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