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Unworthy I shed the tears of a fool Why cry for a cause without hope This paralyzing pain that tares me apart Does so for a reason undeserving I will halt all emotion So that i do not feel for somthing Not of worth Author's note: I don't even know if this poem makes sense, i made this up as i went along and it is 2:30am here so im a little coo-coo sweatdrop but anyhoo here is another poem.

Posted by: haruko-takun Mon Jun 11, 2007 @ 08:32am

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Commented on: Tue Jun 12, 2007 @ 06:21am


	Ladies and Gentlemen meet Chewbacca:Chewbacca is a Wookie from the planet Kishic, but Chewbacca now lives on the planet Endor. Now think about it. That does not make sense. Sadly this was the funniest way to put it... Its all over the place did you really feel what you wrote? Some poems lack coherence and that may be taking liberties due to poetic license... however I dont get a bit of what you wanted to express here Then again I know very little of poetry and even less of the people who write it so please dont mind this much

Commented on: Fri Jun 15, 2007 @ 08:42pm


	i'm sorry but i think all your work is very good even if you r coco but you know i know you sooooooooooo i guess i'm used to it lol

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