Confused and scared

• Artist: Wildly_Androgynous
• Description: this is me to an extent
• Date: 05/31/2010
• Tags: confusesd scared depressed worried

Scarlet drips from my wrists
I sit and stare at the small slits
i raise the blade once again
over the years it has became my friend
I want iit all to end
pain
love
anger
hate
lose
regret
A few people wont let me though
they say it will get better
when.....
when again will i never have to see my
Silver friend again?

Comments

[bram toker]

This is a good piece, but it also seems very angsty. When you write, you need to try and eliminate angst because it can make you seem whiny and self-involved. While I read this, I thought it was very boring and overused--until the last two lines. Those last two lines completely uplifted the entire poem.