Gone?

• Artist: aya Fujimiya_Omi Takatori
• Description: Just something else that I wrote
• Date: 04/23/2010
• Tags: gone

I try not to cry
When I think of you
But I didn’t say good-bye
And I badly wanted to.
Now that you aren’t here
I can’t help but feel guilt
Every time I look in the mirror
I see what good you built.
But lately the good is gone
The bad has taken over
Everything I do is wrong
I want to rest on your shoulder.

Comments

[bloodtearrose]

I would like to see more vivid images.
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[aya Fujimiya_Omi Takatori]

Yes it is a little abrupt. But if you knew who it was directed at, it wouldn't seem as much so.

[Pegasaurus Rex]

It ends a little abruptly, doesn't it?

[Hells_Demonic_Princess]

sadly it is true