love is when

• Artist: iiThe_Crip_Queenii
• Description: i like this one....
• Date: 08/16/2009
• Tags: love

love is when....

you can't stop thinking bout them
when u see them or hear there name
your whole world lights up
when they smile u smile
when the laugh
you laugh
when they cry
you cry
you feel what they feel
when they never leave your mind
when u go to sleep smiling because
of something they said or did earlier that day
when you look at them
everything turns right
when you touch them
u get that feeling
what is love...
love is all of the above

Comments

[Mishtez]

I like the idea but try to refine it a little more. as electric said.

to the reader, it is a bit hard to understand without proper grammar and spelling.

[ElectricxChaos]

i didnt like it.. its not really proper english.. and i agree with the lines but it's hard to take someone seriously in poetry with incorrect spelling and grammar.. although what comes from the heart need not be proper.. idk

[iiThe_Crip_Queenii]

i like this one